A Sister's Love

One of the best...you have written so far...

I loved this more than anything that you posted...it doesn't mean the other ones weren't good...
They were also good but not as great as this...
Now, you know how to make a story GREAT.
Keep posting now..Thank for the post...
Have a good time.

Amazing

This is an amazing story! i absolutly loved it. one of the best i've read!

Breathtaking!

Of all the stories I have read on this site, especially in this genre, this is easily one of the very best. I thank you for sharing it with us. It is beautifully written, beautifully punctuated and for all of that I thank you. I hate reading sloppy text. Best wishes, MB.

absolutely perfect

My god... that was the BEST story i have read yet on this website, I wish my vocabulary was greater so i could find the perfect word!

Fantastic!

5 stars (or whatever the things are that we rate with, that is)! It's too bad that society canot accept familial Love the same as extra-Familial Love. Females usually become horny when they Love someone, I've noticed. Your story was a beautiful one. I'm glad that it had such a gorgeous ending! You certainly have a knack for writing. Keep sharing your prose with us mintabal, please! I like your style. You are one of the best incest writers here! Nothing sleazy about your stuff, either.

I FUCKED MY SIS BY READING IT....MARVELLOUS

I fucked my little sister and banged my cock into her little tight Pussy and undiscovered Ass treasure.

Amazing Story

This one is Amazing Story. I liked it very much. I Would be Lucky if I got this chance.

Thrilling Story

Great story. Made me horny for my own sister...I wish I could impregnage my sister and marry her right now...It is a great feeling to think about my sister this way...

ohmygosh

Compared to the crude garbage other authors put in here,this was absolutely beautiful! Two semi-innocents from an unfamiliar culture raise erotica to a very high level,and this author describes it all perfectly.

EXCELLENT...

...story about my favorite fantasy. You developed the characters and the plot so expertly. I felt as though I was right there with the young couple. I am so glad it finished happily. I guess I am a sucker for happy endings. Thanks. Jim

learn

you obviously are not from a english speaking country but if you are going to write in english go to school and learn the proper way to word things or write in your native language this is way to hard to read and understand you also need to let the readers know at the begining that you are not from an english speaking country

Awesome

It was such a cute story, and well developed! However when relatives have children together, there is normally a complication. I loved it even though the sentence structure was a little off. Great job!:)

I loved it. Indian incest. Anyone with a similar experiences please mail me. badshah2460@yahoo.co.uk

extraordinary!

This is one of the best I've read. Well written.

Just garbage !!

"1" !

Astonishing

Normally I do not care to read anything written by authors from the sub continent, because I find their phraseology too "elaborate" and "flowery" for my taste.
This, however, I found sensitive and delicately worded, and unspoiled by much of the crudity found in many western works.
A truly beautiful piece of writing, made all the more erotic by it's simplicity.

Few minor mistakes

The mistakes were mostly misspelt words or tiny grammatical errors. Watch for those. Otherwise, the story was amazing and breathtaking. The end definitely had me close to tears. Wonderful, just plain wonderful. Thank you for taking the time to write it all out.

Not bad.

Keep writing.

A Sister's Love - Absolutely Beautiful Story!

I personally know of six brother/sister couples who are very happy, and one of these couples has been together for over 40 years! I believe that the only reason that love relationships such as these are illegal is because of lawyers, who think that if the couple were to get divorced, there would be no settlement and the couple could create some kind of a scam. All they are concerned about is money. Love is love, no matter how you look at it. Three cheers to you for writing one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read!

So Wonderful That We Cried!

My brother and I have been living together as a "married" couple for 30 years, and we both love each other dearly. We read your story together while holding hands. Who cares about spelling and grammar? We not only understood every word, but we felt it in our hearts. This story is so wonderful that it made us BOTH cry. Keep up the good work!

Incest love.

Very good read. I am glad it turned out well in the end.

Shitty

bless you......

i am in support of your love........
in fact it is very good to fall in love between brother and sister...

enjoy your whole life and live it lively.....my bless is always with you...!

Such a beautiful realistic loving Story.

I have read thousands of Incest Stories on this site. This story is one of the best. I am sucker for true stories and it seems to be one of them. I don't care about the Grammar Police. You have presented it very well. Very good job. I am a 73 years young reader of this site. Keep up the good job.

Not a bad storyline BUT

It's written in tipical Indian English, mistakes in spelling and grammar. I too suggest you get an editor they would help make your story far more enjoyable to read..⭐️⭐️⭐️