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Jimmy's Luck: The Beginning

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/24/06

why make his mom a whore,no reason for it

do you no what one on one sex is.why open his mom up for that kind of hassel.

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by Tibxo11/24/06

Good story but...

I thought it was a really good story, right up to the point he wanted his mother to become a sex slave. That part didn't make sense to me

Sorry.

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by Anonymous11/24/06

ok but....

The hottest story I've ever read w/mom & son is Naughty High Class Mom pt.2 This is good but not even close the Naughty High Class Mom story.

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by ElbForaker11/24/06

Great!

While others don't like the mother becoming the son's sex slave, I think it is awesome. It leaves a lot of options for future stories, and I think it will be really hot!!! Keep up the great work! Glad to have you back!!!

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by duddle14611/24/06

Interesting Read!

A little different boys and their mothers story. I found it enjoyable and wonder if there will be more from this wonderful writer. Welcome back! Well Written!

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by Anonymous11/25/06

Great

I think this story is great and making the mom into a sex slave is brillant.
Keep up the good work and i hope to hear a sequal soon

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by Anonymous11/26/06

Good story until...

Good story but the being his sex slave just did not make sense if he loves her so much????.....

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by RavenOnCa11/27/06

Hmmmmm

Excellent story..had me on the edge whole story. Only part that didnt seem right was the sex slave part.... Guess maybe I am just greedy, and would want to keep her for myself.

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by Anonymous06/25/07

Great story

Please proceed with your idea.
Let the boy find out strangers for his mom.
I'm expecting a big (very big:7 feet tall)young guy who gives the lady the treatment she deserves ;in front of and with the approval of her son, he enjoys to cradle and bounce in all ways the older woman in his strong arms carrying her like a child all around the house and outside(at the pool or the beach).
He becomes her master,he loves to handle the mother of his friend like a playtoy, until she accepts her new daddy and is turned into his (and her son) loving slave.
Wait for next chapter.

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by Anonymous11/06/07

Someone should draw this story

Amazingly sexy

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by oldwayne02/24/08

Totally Wild!!!

This was about as down and dirty as it gets, without getting in to real filth. Thanks for sharing that vivid imagination.

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by snath195803/20/08

Loved it

I loved the story in its entirety. Thanks

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by Anonymous02/02/09

i see a lot of inmature men out there

it was goog until the sex slave and the other men.with thing as aids and stds out there to kill you,why put his mom in harms way.this where the childish crap comes in.

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by Anonymous11/01/09

sex slave

A nice story with the winning of the lotto and buying a nice home for his mom but then totally ruined with the sex slave bit - WHY??? Up to that point is was a romantic dream filled story then sank in to the depths of depravity and all that shit - you ruined what was a nice tale with that filth and garbage.

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by BillandBill06/23/11

delisous story

I liked your story very much. The sex slave addition was also a turn on.For me this didn't spoil the story at all. More please.

Bill

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by Bfreetorun09/30/11

Good story but I don't like the fact that she is his sex slave and has to fuck others.

Guess I am just too old fashioned. Enjoyed the story though.

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by FallenAlfar06/23/12

I agree with....

.....Bfreetorun and Judy(the mom), because sex isn't just supposed to be about pure fucking. There's also meant to be an emotional attachment. If you want a woman to get gang-banged, you make sure its with people she knows like a friend, neighbor, son, boss, father, bro, husband..........hell even the frikkin mailman. In a story you should point out that its a world free of STD's ,because if she has sex with a group of strangers its not only impersonal its also dangerous in the worst way. And besides why does an 18-year old have NO possessive streak in him at all?

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by LAROC11/10/12

WHY A SEX SLAVE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ASSHOLE!!!!!!!!!! IT'S YOUR MOTHER, NO AMOUNT OF MONEY CAN CHANGE THAT. YOU ARE A VERY SICK FUCK. TREAT HER LIKE A LADY, KEEP HER TO YOURSELF. AND ALWAYS TAKE CARE OF HER. ABUSE OF A MOTHER IN ANY WAY , IS SICK SICK SICK NO MATTER WHAT SHE DOES OR HAS DONE. SHES STILL MOM. NOT A FAN OF THIS WRITER. LAROC OF AGES

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by BillyF10/20/13

sick !!!!

Ahole your mother and a black...

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by mafia_patriarch10/20/13

I thought it was a good story. But, like the others, I don't hold with the sex slave angle. It's distasteful, though I saw part of it coming. "I'll do anything for..." is always dangerous. But the one thought that stayed with me was : He DOES know he has to pay taxes..right? .

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by Sex4lf5705/03/14

Too bad you had to end it with the sex slave thing. It was a hot story up til then.

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