by Summer_flash
You are a good writer. You have pace, style, grace and tone with this piece. Also, most importantly, you have heat.
I am surprised there are not more comments - but then a lot of the people on here seem to prefer utter crap.
This is not that.
GSJ
Having re-read and enjoyed your stories many times, I have to agree with out friend in London !! Hot stuff to be enjoyed by both men and women!! The use of the pen and the language is the true measure of the quality of your workmanship, and as has been said, it too is hot, HOT !! Waiting for more.
Great story, and well written. Such a treat, Looking forward to reading more in a quiet moment :0)