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Sometimes.....
...quite often actually, you make me smile. Like right now.
Tess
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Nicely done ..
Now I need run out to pick up a nice big pizza to go with the liquid refreshment...
I Like ~!!
An advertisement for free enterprise gone wild ...
Love the humor and the dry wit too.
More please and pass the pretzels ...
ha!
Took a second reading for me to get this:
Big Bite Pizza offers free delivery
(but I am not pregnant yet)
Thank you
...for your kind comments. My last few poems got on Literotica overall mostly positive reception, which feels nice (for a change :).
*
Hate to be a party pooper. I assume you want honesty.
The delivery does not meet expectations. But it is better than a 75.
Pizza?
I am not pregnant, will never be pregnant, so why am I suddenly hungry for pizza. Oh, make that with sausage and mushrooms, please. *grins* Fun read!
in response
This could use some tightening up.
Too choppy at the start but comes together nicely
before it's done.
My guess is you wrote it in ten minutes.
No Bullshit!
thanks,
andy
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