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My Sand Castle

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz11/23/06

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A bit of magic
For that most fragile of constructs
A castle of sand filled with hope...

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by Unbridled_Passion11/24/06

keep on truckin'

keep that positive attitude and things will always work out

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by twelveoone11/24/06

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first one I've seen from you that dips into the stock images.

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by RhymeFairy11/25/06

I like this castle, think I shall stay ~

I love the feeling here.
Yes, a bit of shoch but what is life without shock eh.
You paint a beautiful picture with a sound brush.
Think you dipped it in honey a bit there at the end.
Nice touch ~

More Please~

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