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Hibernation

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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Trail11/23/06

Hibernation

excellent tought poetically written

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by LeBroz11/23/06

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A sad tale
To sleep while awaiting love's return
And life rejuvenated.

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by Anonymous11/23/06

tt2u...

....does it again. Is this hopeful? I like to think so. Love is just around the corner.

tess

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by WickedEve11/23/06

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Oh, these are really good lines, tungy:
instead it was just a heatwave
a momentary rising
from an early grave

Hope your hibernation is brief. :)

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by Anonymous11/24/06

may

the polar bear goddess awaken your slumber with her white furry warmth...great images..blue

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by RhymeFairy11/25/06

I'll add to that ...

I love the feeling of warmth here, then we get the rug pulled out. Thrown in the cold with just a dream overhead.

Love these images and hate the feeling of being left behind. That's what makes it such a great poem my friend. You have my 5 with this one ...

More Please

and I too am hoping your slumber is short
and full of sweet honey dreams ~

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