by tungtied2u
excellent tought poetically written <grin (~_~) good topic, great poem!
....does it again. Is this hopeful? I like to think so. Love is just around the corner.
tess
Oh, these are really good lines, tungy:
instead it was just a heatwave
a momentary rising
from an early grave
Hope your hibernation is brief. :)
the polar bear goddess awaken your slumber with her white furry warmth...great images..blue
I love the feeling of warmth here, then we get the rug pulled out. Thrown in the cold with just a dream overhead.
Love these images and hate the feeling of being left behind. That's what makes it such a great poem my friend. You have my 5 with this one ...
More Please
and I too am hoping your slumber is short
and full of sweet honey dreams ~