All Comments on 'Hibernation'

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
Hibernation

excellent tought poetically written <grin (~_~) good topic, great poem!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A sad tale

To sleep while awaiting love's return

And life rejuvenated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
tt2u...

....does it again. Is this hopeful? I like to think so. Love is just around the corner.

tess

WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
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Oh, these are really good lines, tungy:

instead it was just a heatwave

a momentary rising

from an early grave

Hope your hibernation is brief. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
may

the polar bear goddess awaken your slumber with her white furry warmth...great images..blue

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 17 years ago
I'll add to that ...

I love the feeling of warmth here, then we get the rug pulled out. Thrown in the cold with just a dream overhead.

Love these images and hate the feeling of being left behind. That's what makes it such a great poem my friend. You have my 5 with this one ...

More Please

and I too am hoping your slumber is short

and full of sweet honey dreams ~

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