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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz11/24/06

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The solution to the problem
Is obvious you see;
Don't look back, leave wounds in peace;
Nicely done in pulling the reader in.

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by duddle14611/24/06

Lovely read...

I liked the comparison of differences - boxers embracing
bra - nightdress kissing stuffed shirt. Cleverly Written!

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by Anonymous11/25/06

great

comparatives the clothing contrast makes it work...blue

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by Maria239411/28/06

I agree

cleverly written, especially your use of off rhyme and witty language. enjoyed :)

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by Bill Dada06/02/07

^

Never realized indecision could be so much fun.

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