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Erotica Blunders: Take 1

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by Anonymous08/07/04

Ho Ho Ho He He He Ha Ha ----Etc.

Dear Rrrosyn, Your sense of humor is wonderful. I haven't laughed that much in a long time. You missed a good one. "She took his head in her hands and moved him on top of her body", sounds a lot like professional wrestling and they are strictly amature. Seriously, you make many good points that I, as a wanna-be writer, will take to heart. Thanks again for a good belly laugh.

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by Sexuallyfree03/28/09

Thanks for the Laugh

This was very light hearted and I enjoyed it. Guess proof reading is a good practice to partake in before submitting and sharing any creative piece, no?

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