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Creature Ch. 02

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by Anonymous01/26/13

This is a weird story

I don't understand where you were going with the story. You have some kind of creature screwing him getting pregnant by him in squirting fluid into him. The leave the fluids in him for 9 months like they were brewing up some beer. Then 9 months later she has the kid they show up she grows up in front of him and then she sucks all the fluid out of him. The the mother and daughter fight daughter apparently killed the mother and a daughter takes him for her own self? This is 1 of the most stupid ass fucking storie I've ever read on this website. Because I don't understand it there's no details on why he was chosen what he was really meant to be used for except for being a beer brewer and sex toy. P.S. Dont give up your day job if you got 1 trying to do this stuff.

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