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very inventive!
a new meaning to the alphabet
erotic ABC's
I liked...
"k is the kazillion kisses that you grace upon my face,"
cute, witty write (~_~)
Ever learning...
Who ever knew there was an erotic alphabet. This is a clever little poem which must have taken quite a bit of thought.
Well Crafted! Amusing!
Liked your use of the abc's
I thought it was cleverly done. Kept the readers attention to the very end, most enjoyable.
New subject-
Have you thought about perhaps using another way of weaving the abc's in your poem.
Like a ribbon woven of tbe abc's that creates the words and the robbon with words wraps around your lovers body enticing and exciting him to erection and delivering his male offering to you.
This is just a thought-I was considering using this type of theme, but I will never get around to it-you are welcome to use it if you wish.
easy213 Literotica
Liked your use of the abc's
I thought it was cleverly done. Kept the readers attention to the very end, most enjoyable.
New subject-
Have you thought about perhaps using another way of weaving the abc's in your poem.
Like a ribbon woven of the abc's that creates the words and the ribbon with words wraps around your lovers body enticing and exciting him to erection and delivering his male offering to you.
This is just a thought-I was considering using this type of theme, but I will never get around to it-you are welcome to use it if you wish.
easy213 Literotica
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