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got alot of us by surprise I bet, nice twist at the ending there
Cheesey Crackers!!
Classic Hdk, thanks a bunch.
EXCELLENT!!
A fine job and a teriffic ending. R.T.
HAHAHAHAHA
Nice twist at the end....
There you go AGAIN!!
Awesome twist and a sharp poke in the eye with a pointy stick lol
I love the way your mind twists and turns -
i realize this is a flash story
and sometimes they are good and go to the jugular as this one did, but I personally would have liked you to explain why a wife of 20+ years would cheat with a Neanderthal and apparently for so long. This makes the story shallow and weak but it does appeal to the "dump the bitch" crowd who need no motivation for revenge.
Unexpected Twist
Good story, unexpected twist.
Why
was Dan arrested? He was thrown naked and assaulted by Jeff in his own house and then again when handcuffed. Surely Jeff should be facing charges of trespass and assault?
In response to 7/25/12 Anonymous
Because she is a woman. I was married for 26 years and had 3 kids, youngest in the 6th grade when she got up one morning and said she didn't want to be a wife or mother anymore and the kids were my problem. Come to find out she had been screwing around for the last two years and didn't want to keep sneaking around and knew I wouldn't put up with it. Twelve years later, only one of the kids even talks to her, the guys she was screwing dumped her, two fiances dumped her after she moved in with them. One in three months, the other in four months. She finally married a guy because they didn't live together before they got married. Oh yeah, 5 months after she moved out, she was wanting me to take her back. Some women are just fucked up.
Nice Change of Plot
All your readers have questions? All the questions are answered, short, concise, sweet and to the point!
She cheated on hubby and also cheated on her lover. Hubby figures it all out, all of a sudden. Hubby is a realist, love and sex is great but cheating...Get Out!
Good short story - Thanks!
Excellent Tale
The plot twist was great. Time to dump a cheating whore.
OH YEAH
ITS HARD TO MAINTAIN A SCHEDULE
it more so to remember other peoples itenary TK U MLJ LV NV
Too funny!
I loved the story, loved the humor, and loved the gotcha.
And I also think it's hilarious how everybody's panties have got all bunched up. It's a story, for god's sake, a bit of entertainment, and a bit of a laugh. Doesn't need to be dissected, and needed to be written the way it was for the punchline.
But hey, I got plenty of laughs from the comments too, so maybe I shouldn't complain. You'd think some of these yokels were dissecting a historical document.
(BTB!)
3 iron? 4 iron? really?
now a driver or a putter and we are talking serious shit.
it seems the soon to be ex wife already knew how to play through.
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