All Comments on 'Christmas Fifties'

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damppantiesdamppantiesover 17 years ago
Good ones

I look forward to reading your fifty worders in every contest. They've become a Litradition now. Keep them coming. :)

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Beautiful!

Delicate little literary Gems - some fragile some evoking other emotions as only Mr. Oggbashan can write them. Thank you for the happy, happy experience of reading them. Brilliantly and cleverly written! Most enjoyable!

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 17 years ago
The Holidays

have truly started. :) Ogg's wisdom and simple truth should be mandatory to read for anyone wanting to enter Lit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Thank you

for reminding me of what's important about the holidays, and for doing it so beautifully.

Jammies

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
This says it all

Thanks Og, you made my day with this one. Kudos!

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
Ahhhh here they are!

Christmas 1914 is my favorite. Thank you, Og. Truly lovely work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Saturnalia

Why are you so down on the Saturnalia?

R. Richard

photographerphotographerover 17 years ago
What writing is all about

If one wishes to be a writer, look no further than writing like this. Economical in words, but saying more than the mere words convey - you are forced to use your mind - and THAT, fellow people, is what it's all about - the theatre of the mind.

Beautiful work.

Skip1934aSkip1934aover 17 years ago
Wakes the sleeping

A much needed reminder. Where is Christianity going? So many celebrate Christmas as a secular holiday, there seems no connection to its original purpose. Thanks, Og

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Food for Thought

Christmas means a great deal more than presents under the tree. Thank you for an enlightening read, Og. I wish you the best of luck.

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoover 17 years ago
This is why

I've been looking forward to this post. The message is succinctly delivered with economy of word and enormous talent!

Thanks so much for the reaffirmation. Far too often we lose sight of the important things.

MunachiMunachiover 17 years ago
great as always...

great little texts that prove that fifty words is enough to bring across an important message...

deathlynxdeathlynxover 17 years ago
I couldn't do it...

I simply couldn't give you the 1 bomb you deserve ;)

It's insightful and inspiring...Great work!

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 17 years ago
Fine Fifty

Another fine fifty (stories, that is) from the unique mind of the Great Og.

Rumple

angelicminxangelicminxover 17 years ago
Sorry, Og, had to do it

I had to five bomb ya for all the work you put into that. I tried the fifties once... turns out I'm rather chatty, lol. Good luck! ~Minx

DG HearDG Hearover 17 years ago
Nicely done!

Congrads on your submission, very nicely done.

DG Hear

sacksackover 17 years ago
liked them all....

Are you going to get a copyright on the "50's " concept??

kbatekbateover 17 years ago
Because I'm in the Running -

for the last place award,I had no choice but to 5 bomb you this time. Last place shall be mine.

A good use of the 15/50 essay style and good meaning in several of the stanzas.

Well done.

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