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I love a happy ending
Been looking forward to this.
A couple of nice surprises and an ending that gives me hope.
Well done.
Great
Excellent story!!
The pieces of the puzzle came together in a manner that was exhilerating.
You have an excellent style of writing a story that keeps the suspense in place with the principal characters are alloweed some latitude and growth.
Thaks for your other stories as well.
I am a dedicated fan.
Your story…
Has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Authour's Hangout.
Karma...
...does just what it says on the tin! Nice one!
Great read!
I really enjoyed this story!
Brilliant
Wonderful resolve. Can't say ending. It was good to see Conrad and his plan fail because that meant she was a success.
Nice touch with the caretaker, I wondered how that would come back into the story!
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