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Innocence of a child, bewildered
Counterpoint to an adult's vile hate.
What a difference lifetimes make!
Perhaps the little girl's erroneous spelling of Terrorist as errorists says it all. Pity the little children - pity all who dwell in the no man's land of a mad man's cruel ambition.
To err is human
But like that girl, I'm also afraid of errorists. Moreso than terrorists.
what a sense of humor!!
errorists. LOL. SJ, you are a character. I gave you only a 4 because of your repitition of woman. unneeded and you can DO better!!! I am certain you will explain why it is perfect.
cheers
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To err and realize it is human. To err and think God is working through you is to be an errorist.
her understanding
Thank you for all comments, including the shockingly shallow "...humor!!...LOL...!!!...cheers". (The repetitions in my poem are perfect).
About humor, yes, children are amusing. This is a humane touch, that's all.
The child cannot accept that the heinous crimes are committed on purpose, hence she believes that the word must be "errorist". This way she can somehow explain the world around her.
Thank you, it's nice to have readers :),
Senna Jawa
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.
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