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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent and original

Keep the great story coming. A nice change from the usual substandard stuff we get lately on Literotica

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
VERY .......

Very nice.... thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
inteeresting

Could be developed a bit better, but interesting.

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Well-written

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice twist

This is a different kind of story...I really didn't know what the mistress wanted with her at first.

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