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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved It!

A classic case of "He said, She said."

The ladies' diary goes on forever about how she had a fight with her boss and her mother, then snuggled with her boyfriend, and then they made passionate love after his football game was over on the tele. The sex was incredible and it more than made up for her lousy day.

The guy's diary reads "Liverpool won the footie match. Got shagged. Great day."

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Part 3!!!

Erica comes home filled with "cum"...asking how his team played...all the while saying her "team" kept scoring until she was too tired to keep playing...LOL

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Excellent complement to the first part.

However, apart from putting into the humour and satire section,

why not put it into the same story as 2 sections, to enhance reading pleasure?

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
FOR ONCE I THINK SHE MADE THE RIGHT CHOICE

it takes two to succeed and two to make a go of it. TK U MLJ LV NV

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