All Comments on 'Heather and Riley Ch. 01'

This could get to be a very interesting story. I thought it was a great start. But, please, don't leave it unfinished. Keep it going. Take constructive as building points. And the kind of dumb comments, let it flow like water off your back. Seyla

Very good start. This story could get extreemly good. You tease us too much! give us more story soon please!