All Comments on 'A Christmas Fire'

Rich and Ellen are two people who so richly deserve each other. (I mean that in a good way) This endearing Christmas story fits right into the feel good(Oh Yeah) happenings to this endearing couple. Loved the Christmas Present still unwrapped. Terrific Write! Enjoyable Read!

It doesn't have anything totally disgusting in it like the other stories and its just like what christmas is with your loved one. it should be special and magical. good job :-D

A wonderful sequel! Loving, tender, sexy and truly romantic. Once again, you did a fine job, author.

I loved this story, it was very romantic and the christmas gift at the end was a great compliment to an already wonderful story. Great Job and good luck with the contest you have my vote

I have read many of the Christmas submissions and this one is by far the best. Good luck.

that meets the criterion of "stroke story" and "Romance". Not easy to pull off....good luck!

Great heartwarming yet erotic chapter.

Blondie! I am almost speachless. And so very turned on by the romance and love these two have for each other. Thank your for creating such wonderful and believable characters. Absoultely Awesome! Keep up the good work!

One thing, editor. A few pronouns mixed up but not too bad at all.

I can only hope my writing becomes as good as your's someday.

...and loving. Your characters compliment one another. If we look around us in our daily lives, there are usually only a small handful of people we see, who truly love and respect one another. Your writing embraces that feeling in this story. Great job!

Best ive ever read

Loved the story!! Thoroughly enjoyed the story as well as your writing skill. It is very refreshing to read a story on here and not have to deal with all the mis-spellings as well as other grammatical issues that plague many authors. Thankyou again for the beautiful story!! Quite understandable that you won!

I really liked the story, it was erotic but in a warm and loving way. Although it did make a great Christmas gift, I can't believe that Ellen was able to keep the pregnancy a secret for two months.

I had to chuckle regarding the 10 year old lingerie. The description of the feathers and such were spot on because my wife and I did the same thing, digging out the old feather covered see through nightie and panties. Not nearly as sexy as long ago, but fun memories. Thanks