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Death Is In the Wind

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/29/06

Living fast!

A man who has seized the tree of life and shook it for all it's worth finally admits that death is now likely in his future. Almost mystical as the visual images are spewed forth of what has been - but soon will be lost. Wonderful Poem. Well crafted!

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by duddle14611/29/06

Living fast!

A man who has seized the tree of life and shook it for all it's worth finally admits that death is now likely in his future. Almost mystical as the visual images are spewed forth of what has been - but soon will be lost. Wonderful Poem. Well crafted!

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by duddle14611/29/06

Living fast!

A man who has seized the tree of life and shook it for all it's worth finally admits that death is now likely in his future. Almost mystical as the visual images are spewed forth of what has been - but soon will be lost. Wonderful Poem. Well crafted!

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by Velvet_Polly11/29/06

too much

beautiful be. once or twice would have sufficed, repitition doesn't work well in this poem.

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