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At Hermano's Mexican Dream Theater

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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz11/29/06

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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by duddle14611/29/06

Dreams may come...

Elegant beauty and so very well written. A joy to Read!

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by Velvet_Polly11/29/06

you are

a talented write, you could tighten this up a bit, lose the ellipses, mere distractions. I like your descriptions. good work

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by lobomao12/02/06

•) I've eatten there many times

I perfered the Enchiladas Bruegel
Although nextime I think I'll try
the Tlacoyos de Bosch, as they looked delicious
ah for those nastursium and eel salads
with just the right amount of lime
Newton's sticky apple was a let down
but the floor show could not be beaten
I escaped with my life and a few coins in change
and this dumb t shirt

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by duddle14602/02/07

dreams

food galore ~ sexual appetite waiting to be satisfied.

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