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All These Years

bySelena_Kitt©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/16/17

What story?

There was a story here?

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by ErotFan11/23/17

This is a vignette, not really a story 4*'s

It may be the opening, the middle, or the close of a story.
You might try writing a "story" where this is the opening, middle or close - or one of each. Now there's a challenge.
You have a demonstrably vivid imagination and writing skills.
Go on; give it a try.

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by Anonymous12/10/17

Fell Into A Routine

As a child, I looked at my parents' daily routine. Mom cleaning the house and singing to me. Baking cakes and cookies. Seeing to it that our clothes were washed, dried, folded or hung in the closet. Mom loved working in her flower garden. Dad would come home and playfully kiss Mom and tell her that he loved her. He said it differently each time, but even as young as I was, I knew he was expressing his love for Mom. I remember looking forward to the day when my future wife and I slipped into such a wonderful routine. Then I started hearing from my wife how friends of ours had divorced because their marriages had become routine and boring. And the next thing I knew I was being served with a divorce. When my wife finally answered my question, "Why?", she said, " Like so many of our friends, our marriage became all routine." Now, I live in a shoebox apartment, making payments on the house that once was mine, paying child support on a son that calls another man, "Daddy", paying alimony, paying off her car and insurance. So, another man is having sex with her at no cost to him. They don't talk about marriage. Neither want the routine of marriage. I have not even dated since I was served. There is not a woman on earth I trust with my heart now.

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by Anonymous01/10/18

Excellent 5*

You have more talent than most on this site.

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by Anonymous02/09/18

No. FUCK NO

I can't see how anyone gives this more than one star.
You catch her in bed.
You let the guy walk out.
You let her blame you.
You let her hug you as you forgive her? She is still nak3d and wet from him.
Fuck no.

Earlier you talk about how cold she is and you too as your testicles tighten.
I disagree. You obviously lack balls, testosterone nor any sense of manhood.

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by Anonymous02/11/18

Stupid question

What a stupid question to ask?What are we going to do know?.No brainer he dumps her.Also a nothing of a story,why publish it.?

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by penneydog5502/28/18

YUK

Wrong wrong wrong! The only thing that is right is the timer on the stove
Speaking of time" Mickey Mouse Club" closing song Now it's time to say goodbye to all our family! Good luck y'all ★★☆ WOOF!

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by Anonymous03/23/18

Why

Why print this nothing story,Literotica can't be that hard up?

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by deunan512204/02/18

Well Written

This story makes me feel things. No punches pulled, just good writing, great storytelling. I was more interested in your How Tos this was my chance to see what you can do with an actual story. I won't ever read it again, but if I ever come across it again, I'll remember it. It made me feel things.

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