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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.
Unarguably
one of the best poems you've ever written, RF. A well crafted poem bristling with emotion and an honest, captivating theme.
Tender and Moving!
What was - is what - is if only in memory. Tender moving poignant reflections of a magical, mythical vamp complete with
wrinkles, gray hairs, curlers and houseshoes. Breathtakingly lovely - so well crafted. Re-endears the sweetness of life!
Beautiful
When one can find beauty in wrinkles and curlers, you know you are loved. Great write!
I want you...
I was expecting an Uncle Sam to be pointing a finger
I was hoping...
as much as you have grown, that you might work on your punctuation. When you ask a question should not a ? follow? I believe so. This is one of the better works today. You could work on it a little, but an entertaining read.
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wicked wicked...
necessary redundancy
most understood,
repeating and
finding a beat
and i do, in this
lusty groove.
keep it up girl!
curt
Beautiful poem..
oozing with love and tenderness
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