by poisonpen
This is a truly horrifying and stimulating tale of a woman getting screwed in more than one way by a vampire. Then again, it turns out pretty well, though I won't say just how. The woman's attitude definitely makes her grudge fuck material, in my opinion.
I have been waiting and waiting for new vampire fiction since October! I loved this story and hope you will be writing more.
OMG. This was great. I love how you began with foreshadowing that Carla would become a vampire with something about her "hunger" in the first few paragraphs. Write on! A.W.
i couldnt put it down. my lover was sleeping right beside me and he never knew what was going on. i read the others afterwards and wow! if you make this into a novel i will support it right away huge kudos!!!
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND ENGAGING. SOUNDS LIKE A SUCCUBUS VAMP...I'M NOT REALLY INTO VAMPIRES BUT I'M WORKING ON A VAMPIRE NOVEL AND I FIND THIS TALE DEEPLY INTENSE!!! :)