All Comments on 'A Dark and Deadly Lover'

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SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 17 years ago
This will be mentioned on the AH.

This is a truly horrifying and stimulating tale of a woman getting screwed in more than one way by a vampire. Then again, it turns out pretty well, though I won't say just how. The woman's attitude definitely makes her grudge fuck material, in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
awsome

best erotic vampire story ive read so far...was very arousing

coffinbaitcoffinbaitover 17 years ago
Finally some new vampire fiction

I have been waiting and waiting for new vampire fiction since October! I loved this story and hope you will be writing more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot! Delicious!

Well written, too.

Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
... Wow.

That was great and really well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
HOWL

I thought he was going to be a werewolf at first! But very nice :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great.

OMG. This was great. I love how you began with foreshadowing that Carla would become a vampire with something about her "hunger" in the first few paragraphs. Write on! A.W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
this should be a novel

i couldnt put it down. my lover was sleeping right beside me and he never knew what was going on. i read the others afterwards and wow! if you make this into a novel i will support it right away huge kudos!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hahahahaha

My dream guy! Excellent work.

angelx602angelx602about 15 years ago
Yes

I love a well written vampire story, very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wow!

Love the story! Great job! :)

NavauraNavauraover 11 years ago

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND ENGAGING. SOUNDS LIKE A SUCCUBUS VAMP...I'M NOT REALLY INTO VAMPIRES BUT I'M WORKING ON A VAMPIRE NOVEL AND I FIND THIS TALE DEEPLY INTENSE!!! :)

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