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A Dark and Deadly Lover

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by SEVERUSMAX12/06/06

This will be mentioned on the AH.

This is a truly horrifying and stimulating tale of a woman getting screwed in more than one way by a vampire. Then again, it turns out pretty well, though I won't say just how. The woman's attitude definitely makes her grudge fuck material, in my opinion.

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by Anonymous12/07/06

awsome

best erotic vampire story ive read so far...was very arousing

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by coffinbait12/07/06

Finally some new vampire fiction

I have been waiting and waiting for new vampire fiction since October! I loved this story and hope you will be writing more.

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by Anonymous12/28/06

Hot! Delicious!

Well written, too.

Thank you!

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by Anonymous02/28/07

... Wow.

That was great and really well written.

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by Anonymous03/30/07

HOWL

I thought he was going to be a werewolf at first! But very nice :)

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by Anonymous06/01/07

Great.

OMG. This was great. I love how you began with foreshadowing that Carla would become a vampire with something about her "hunger" in the first few paragraphs. Write on! A.W.

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by Anonymous11/14/08

this should be a novel

i couldnt put it down. my lover was sleeping right beside me and he never knew what was going on. i read the others afterwards and wow! if you make this into a novel i will support it right away huge kudos!!!

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by Anonymous01/04/09

Hahahahaha

My dream guy! Excellent work.

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by angelx60204/18/09

Yes

I love a well written vampire story, very well done.

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by Anonymous04/20/09

Wow!

Love the story! Great job! :)

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by Navaura11/27/12

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND ENGAGING. SOUNDS LIKE A SUCCUBUS VAMP...I'M NOT REALLY INTO VAMPIRES BUT I'M WORKING ON A VAMPIRE NOVEL AND I FIND THIS TALE DEEPLY INTENSE!!! :)

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