Xaemyl's Tale Ch. 02

a surprising pleasure.

I'm actually really impressed with this story I rather enjoyed it, I wasn't sure I was going to when I figured what the story line was going to be. I'll admit I didn't read chapter one, but I do wish there was another chap. I'm actually highly surprised it wasn't more about his almost submission of wanting to be with her. What I mean is that you could make this into a story of how she was actually a hunter.... A predator in her own right. Someone that was playing coy to capturing a demon herself, perhaps a spell within the sweetness of her body... And a few carefully placed phrases and words.

Once again, thank you for this story, I really enjoyed it. ^^