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Michelle's Capture

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/11/05

POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR

Lousy

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by Anonymous11/14/06

It needs some work

Bad writing all around. I couldn't get past the extreme gramatical errors to actually read it. Perhaps you could fix the problems (conversations, quotations marks, other punctuation, etc) and make it readable. Basic grammar counts for a lot, even in erotica. If we can read it, we can't enjoy it.

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by Anonymous06/27/08

Not Too Bad !!!!!

Funny I began reading this and it brought me back to a time I thought I had forgotten. I was taking in a way not very different from this story.
I can still recall my rapist's cock in my ass and mouth,thanks your story made me cum very hard.

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