All Comments on 'All I Want for Christmas'

by SolitaryBiSoul

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don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Good reading!

They're off to a good start. Maybe next Christmas they will have a little one that Santa can visit?

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Lovely Christmas Story!

Gen is spending a lonely sad evening at home when her lover she has only just written appears. The sweetness of their coming together is captivating and lends to the appeal of this sweet Christmas tale. Well Written! Enjoyable Read!

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
A sweet little tale...

full of love and compassion. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Nice job, SBS. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
good read!

Nicely written, very sweet story. Opening it with the letter was a good touch, but I would have liked to know what went on between Mark and Gin before then, to bring her to that moment. And Brits drinking coffee??? The dirty talk during lovemaking was also a bit surprising, not what I was expecting from the female character, but I guess in the heat of the moment, it fits.

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