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Rough
This is romance???
Not much romance
There doesn't seem to be much romance in the story, in fact none at all. Now if this Chapter 1 and the story continues there it may end up a romance story. One would hope anyway.
okay...
Despicable characters with backstory...okay...next!
I really liked it
I found it very sad, and moving, and disturbing. In addition to being very sexy.
I can't tell whether this is the first part of something longer--but if you're thinking about continuing it, I hope you will.
Best, ohio
Deeper than the usual Lit
I like this story. It was creative. Dark and troubling. Makes the reader think and wonder. Well written.
I liked it! I thought it was a bit sad.
Two people who are obviously very sexually compatible. But, it proves that sex isn't love. Although, some people want to believe that.
You really are a bit warped arent you in this stor
Your comments and lack of understanding on the story Miranda point out why much isnt there.
Excellent story!
I'm amazed that there aren't many comments on this one. It's a bit mysterious, yet clear enough--and full of strong emotion. I liked it very much.
Thanks, ohio
Good Story!!!
Good descriptive narrative and character development. Dark subject but well told; like, the emotions of two people who have a history they wish they could change and raw emotions that prevent a relationship.
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