homeNon-Erotic Poetrymotel ceilingsPublic Comments

All Comments  for

motel ceilings

bycavu182©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz12/01/06

~~

Quite an image here
Of exploring love in all the wrong places
With a view of varied motel ceilings.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by duddle14612/01/06

An old familiar love...

Reflections and thoughts of loves he has known and enjoyed as morning comes and he is ~ on his way.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Maria239412/05/06

the title is intriguing..

the poem is even better.

Normally I find such short lines ineffective, but they work wonderfully here.

good work!!

maria

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to motel ceilings  or
More submissions by cavu182.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel