All Comments on 'The Shock of Her Life Ch. 01'

Are you going to write a sequel? This Nathan Jones could have quite a few wives back in Africa. He could take this bitch and trade her for some cows.The professor could file alienation of affection, but the guy probably has diplomatic immunity.Please continue this story. Luis

VERYYYYY INTERESTING!!! I still would like to know what the Dr. had planed for the slut.

I don´t seem to see much of a story, or a reasonable plot, for that matter., I might be mistaken, but I guess you could have told that "story" using no more than 5 sentences..

good start now finish it.

A good start, but where is the rest of the story?

needs to be finished