All Comments on 'First Kiss'

Nice beginning. When is the next chapter?

But I made an exception this time and am happy that I did

wow - just beautiful...

Very, very nice. It goes to show you that you dont have to have sex for a story to be erotic and hot. I love, absolutely love, kisssing a woman. For a man to describe the feelings and lushness of two women kissing just amazes me! You did quite well and wish that you continue on with this story. Cheryl

That was sooo sweettt :)

That was sweetly sensual with tender passion.

This was sweet. Wish there could've been more to it.