by call_me_dana
The story is well written, a bit strange,to find a female in a construction site, but anywho, she is a shemale, which is what we want........but the story takes a long time and space to develop, before we get to the action. The uncovering of her male clit, always the most delicate point on these stories, is handled very well, although most of us go ahead and taste it, mm. Keep on writing about these magnificent creatures, plizzzzzzzzzzzz
Well written erotic story with a great narrative line. Believable characters with realistic thoughts and fears and hesitation. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
I enjoyed this story. I did think that the story narrator showed very little surprise when he discovered Jaimie was TS. I would have expected that to be a bit of a heart-stopping moment. I think it might add believability if he paused for a moment to consider what he was upto, then proceeded with the rest of the action. I'm pretty sure I would have paused if I'd been in such a situation! Just my 10c worth.
Very nice stoyr. Nice to see mutual attraction and enjoyment. Very creative. Keep up your imaginative story telling. Hugs, Jenna
I loved it. I just had an encounter with a 100% passable shemale and I found this story to be accurate and believable. Yes maybe a longer pause when you discovered her pussy-pole with you sharing your thoughts about how it turned you on etc. would have made the situation even hotter but i still loved it.
It is amazing how one "falls" into these situations. I was hard as soon as you drove up the driveway and found her there. I can imagine how it felt and what it would be like to be in that situation. Wish I could find something like that. Thanks
WOW! WOW! WOW! I've not considered being with a guy BUT, Your almost girl had me hard as a brick and wanting to be the lucky guy having a new adventure. PLEASE write more. I'd love to see where your mind takes us.
35+ yrs in construction, I've never even cum close to anything like that happening to me!