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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wonderrful Story

Great story line so far. Hope there is more to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
really nice sory

well written and just a nice story lucky guy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great start, keep on and on

The story is well written, a bit strange,to find a female in a construction site, but anywho, she is a shemale, which is what we want........but the story takes a long time and space to develop, before we get to the action. The uncovering of her male clit, always the most delicate point on these stories, is handled very well, although most of us go ahead and taste it, mm. Keep on writing about these magnificent creatures, plizzzzzzzzzzzz

Lia MondeLia Mondeabout 17 years ago
Winter Heat

Well written erotic story with a great narrative line. Believable characters with realistic thoughts and fears and hesitation. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.

WanntryWanntryalmost 17 years ago
A comment on content

I enjoyed this story. I did think that the story narrator showed very little surprise when he discovered Jaimie was TS. I would have expected that to be a bit of a heart-stopping moment. I think it might add believability if he paused for a moment to consider what he was upto, then proceeded with the rest of the action. I'm pretty sure I would have paused if I'd been in such a situation! Just my 10c worth.

Jenna2641Jenna2641almost 17 years ago
Lovely Story

Very nice stoyr. Nice to see mutual attraction and enjoyment. Very creative. Keep up your imaginative story telling. Hugs, Jenna

SomehowyouSomehowyouabout 14 years ago
Thanks for the great story

I loved it. I just had an encounter with a 100% passable shemale and I found this story to be accurate and believable. Yes maybe a longer pause when you discovered her pussy-pole with you sharing your thoughts about how it turned you on etc. would have made the situation even hotter but i still loved it.

ouchwantsitouchwantsitover 13 years ago
Great

It is amazing how one "falls" into these situations. I was hard as soon as you drove up the driveway and found her there. I can imagine how it felt and what it would be like to be in that situation. Wish I could find something like that. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Straight guy working in construction

WOW! WOW! WOW! I've not considered being with a guy BUT, Your almost girl had me hard as a brick and wanting to be the lucky guy having a new adventure. PLEASE write more. I'd love to see where your mind takes us.

christieamberleechristieamberleeabout 11 years ago
Good Story!

I wonder if Rudy knew.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
wow

35+ yrs in construction, I've never even cum close to anything like that happening to me!

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I've been writing stories since high school. I even shared a few with my yearbook teacher and got a kiss for endeavors. The stories are from real life experiences and real life fantasies. I write to images I see in day to day life, or wish I did. I hope you enjoy.

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