All Comments on 'Stretched Shimmy'

You have an interesting style, feels like stream of consciousness, mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

Images, allusions, metaphors come directly toward the readers and crash them squarely between startled eyes.

This would make a great audio poem - slam-dunk style.

Tess

oh hell yeah.

i am digging this much. way to go, you poet you.

curt

when I saw the format, I thought...oh dear...what a mess.

I was wrong, it works great!! sounds frenetic, anxious and excited

great piece you have!!

maria