...still good. The dialogues between your hero and heroine are just as snappy, funny and full of sexual innuendos, which make up a good part of your writing. Thanks Ada for another neat chapter
I think you should combine this chapter and the next. They're both kind of short and are related, so it makes sense.
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Still no real sex act yet but...
...still good. The dialogues between your hero and heroine are just as snappy, funny and full of sexual innuendos, which make up a good part of your writing.
Thanks Ada for another neat chapter
too short
I think you should combine this chapter and the next. They're both kind of short and are related, so it makes sense.
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