All Comments on 'Pat'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
no ending?

what happens next?what will happen with the pics and movie? something is missing at the end: it's oiver way too fast!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Should be NonConsent

Not bad, a bit brief. She should have resisted; I think that would have been more likely. Really was more Noncensent category, though. Keep working.

baikberuangbaikberuangover 17 years ago
good...keep going

I've followed your storiesand like the theme of innocent girl allows men to fuck her and gradually submits; keep up the good work...this story does need a detailed extension.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another hot story

Love all the stories Pat is a very hot lady

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
my kind of fantasy

I loved the story I wish that could happen to me maybe even a cock in every hole and between my tits

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love this story

We need more stories

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