by SEVERUSMAX
Sev
You started then dropped this story for years. Why? I don't know, but it the makings of a story so parallel to mine own that, I'm desperately curious as to what the next chapter may hold. I'll email you the details of My story. I implore you to continue this one. It has character development in the infant stages. This could go 20 chapters if written like you are writing it now. Don't stop. I read alot of your work, and I am always impressed.
Keep it up,
Michael in Corvallis OR USA
It had quite a few grammatical and punctuation errors. Hopefully the other stories you have written have been corrected
So far I have really enjoyed this story! I like how he is "rescuing" adam from his evil wife, but still plans on "using" him a little. It appears that Steve will be a lover to Adam, and not a raper.
Please do write the next chapter soon!!!
Where is the rest? I want to know how they get even with Eva. Please describe your characters it helps with telling the story. Are you planning to finish the story?