...fantasy. The writing was a bit rushed, and you could use an editor, but you have great potential as a writer. I hope you continue writing, it's the only way to hone your skill.
I loved the twisted Twister. Sounds like a very interesting game to play at a swinger's party. I also liked this experience as a gift for a man who has or can get anything he wants, monetarily.
Good luck in the contest! ~Minx
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Anonymous12/12/06
Wild present
WOW! That sure turned out to be a wild christmas story ...
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...fantasy. The writing was a bit rushed, and you could use an editor, but you have great potential as a writer. I hope you continue writing, it's the only way to hone your skill.
I loved the twisted Twister. Sounds like a very interesting game to play at a swinger's party. I also liked this experience as a gift for a man who has or can get anything he wants, monetarily.
Good luck in the contest! ~Minx
Wild present
WOW! That sure turned out to be a wild christmas story ...
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