I was so wrapped up in the story that I was fucking his sister with him and I am now soaked .
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Anonymous12/14/06
Fucking Hot!
That was killer, just like all your stories. You have a gift man!
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Anonymous12/21/06
OMG
Okay,I'm hooked. I have just read this and I loaded my tights. I've never done that before from reading a story.
wow...I guess I want my sister too....OMG...
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Anonymous08/20/07
HOT!!!!
Please continue with Alana and Gavin! This is the best series I have read in a long time....Thank you so much!
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Anonymous10/08/07
Another of your very best submissions
I wish I had a brother like Gavin, I am soaking wet fantasicing I was Alana get the goods from both of them,keep up the good work I can do with another spontanious workout. Luv Jenny Cook
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Anonymous12/02/10
Love it!
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Anonymous11/08/13
series SUCKS
once again we get a writer that posts a series but FAILS to properly title the chapters. on a site like this ALL chapters of a series HAVE to have the same title, you just number them or use the subtitle to tell the order to read them in.NO READER wants to go searching for the beginning of a series that the careless writer misstitled. you killed all love between them on the plane and when they landed so this story was total bullshit and never would have happened. when she abandoned him at the airport he would have turned around and gone home then packed and found a new place to live. this was NONEROTIC AT BEST.
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Anonymous10/16/15
To the Anon that say this sucked
YOURE AN IDIOT, nonerotic? That's bullshit. Yes, finding a next part of the series is annoying, but your comment is stupid and you don't even have the guts to sign up and write a poem, much less a story
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Anonymous11/14/15
KY
"Sure enough, a bottle of KY was right next to the toothpaste." Of course, just another normal bathroom.
Need to be careful if you go to clean your teeth in the dark or worse, spread toothpaste on your, or someone else's, arsehole.
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Anonymous01/08/16
lube?
The one comment about outing lube on your tooth brush. What if you put super glue on for lube and got stuck.
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Anonymous01/16/16
Brilliant just bloody brilliant
Bravo well written I've read a few of your other stories and just brilliant keep up the great work so I can keep up the fapping lol ;) :P
Fucking Fantastic
I was so wrapped up in the story that I was fucking his sister with him and I am now soaked .
Fucking Hot!
That was killer, just like all your stories. You have a gift man!
OMG
Okay,I'm hooked. I have just read this and I loaded my tights. I've never done that before from reading a story.
wow...I guess I want my sister too....OMG...
HOT!!!!
Please continue with Alana and Gavin! This is the best series I have read in a long time....Thank you so much!
Another of your very best submissions
I wish I had a brother like Gavin, I am soaking wet fantasicing I was Alana get the goods from both of them,keep up the good work I can do with another spontanious workout. Luv Jenny Cook
Love it!
series SUCKS
once again we get a writer that posts a series but FAILS to properly title the chapters. on a site like this ALL chapters of a series HAVE to have the same title, you just number them or use the subtitle to tell the order to read them in.NO READER wants to go searching for the beginning of a series that the careless writer misstitled. you killed all love between them on the plane and when they landed so this story was total bullshit and never would have happened. when she abandoned him at the airport he would have turned around and gone home then packed and found a new place to live. this was NONEROTIC AT BEST.
To the Anon that say this sucked
YOURE AN IDIOT, nonerotic? That's bullshit. Yes, finding a next part of the series is annoying, but your comment is stupid and you don't even have the guts to sign up and write a poem, much less a story
KY
"Sure enough, a bottle of KY was right next to the toothpaste." Of course, just another normal bathroom.
Need to be careful if you go to clean your teeth in the dark or worse, spread toothpaste on your, or someone else's, arsehole.
lube?
The one comment about outing lube on your tooth brush. What if you put super glue on for lube and got stuck.
Brilliant just bloody brilliant
Bravo well written I've read a few of your other stories and just brilliant keep up the great work so I can keep up the fapping lol ;) :P
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