All Comments on 'Short Shorts Ch. 02'

Deliciously naughty story - I want to be the boy in the cleaners and the dirty old man in the car park.

Very hot story Selena....it well deserves a "5" petting. If you like, check out my stories (especially the two "Lonely Traveller" stories.

I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Selena, your works continue to be among the finest on this site! Where do you find the time to be so erotically prolific?

I loved it i had shot 5 loads while reading ur story. Keep writing more.

Selena, you never fail to get a rise out of me. Thank you once again for a great story.

You're a naughty girl! You should be ashamed of yourself young lady.

Another great read - I wonder, Ms Kittyn, if it makes you as hot to write this story as it makes me to read it?!? Sexy, saucy - and full of attitude!

A note to the writer of the comments from 'needs work' - mate, I suggest you read the story again (and yet again if necessary). You might then understand the categorisation 'First Time'. Try it!

Enjoying this series and I'd love to read more!

my favorite thing about your writing is that you don't include the life story of your protagonists. just enough setup to make it really hot.

I really enjoyed the first two installments of Short Shorts. Are you planning another chance for Lindsey to "be bad".

DOC

Looking for the rest of SHORT SHORTS? It's now titled "Falling Down" and you can find it at excessica (www.excessica.com). Enjoy!

Just for you!

Such a hot, dirty idea! Cleaning up like that after a quick first time fuck! I would have loved to be there!

Lindsey was the naughtiest girl imaginable. In fact she must have been every high-school boy's wet dream, fucking an inexperienced young boy, and exhibiting everything to a complete stranger. She needs a serious spanking

You write like a male, "Oh yeah, fuck me hard, baby. Use that little cunt!"

I must read your other stories.

So what else did you do that day?