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by Anonymous

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by duddle14612/09/06

coffee to go?

The literary journey of your words ~ though a puzzle - intrigue me.

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by My Erotic Trail12/09/06

too short

what was this poem about? It may have been better with more to derive from or sink into, thanks for the read (~_~)

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by LeBroz12/09/06

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That's either a mighty small cup or you like your coffee tepid.

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by vampiredust12/09/06

Excellent

You leave the reader to imagine in his or her mind, great stuff. Well crafted as always

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by Maria239412/10/06

depending upon the wattage

of the microwave, 99 may be sufficient for a warmer than tepid, cup of joe.

I have a feeling there is more to this than meets the eye

thank you for making me think, Senna

maria

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