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BOOKWORM
BE NICER IF YOU SPELL CHECKED B4 SENDING IN WAS LOTS OF TYPE ERRRORS.MAL
Written In WHAT Language?
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What the...?????
It was good
it was an interesting read. i liked it. i guess i didn't notice the spelling mistakes as much as the others. but maybe they are just looking for the mistakes and not enjoying the story.write more looking forward to it.
From the author
hello readers, i hope you like my newest installment. if you don't like spelling mistakes ignore them. you can still read the story with the mistakes. i have read many stories with mistakes and i just try to ignore them. people who actually enjoy the story won't leave comments so please leave comments if you like it and if you don't i'm sorry. i wrote it for my enjoyment and my friends.
Re: From the author
Telling your readers to ignore your spelling errors, and run-on sentences too, just doesn't cut it. With all the volunteers reviewers out there and spell checkers in practically every piece of software used for writing or email, there is no excuse for such poor grammar and spelling.
The premise of the story wasn't too bad, though, but where did the "forget everything" come from? All that was said is that reading the book made the reader horny. This could have been a good story with some help.
Eh...Kinda Basic
Aside from the spelling errors, there isn't much to the story. Girl becomes librarian. Girl finds book. Book makes girl "aroused," but doesn't experience any "mind controlling" effects. Girl "realizes" book will make readers "aroused." Girl uses book on neighbor and somehow it puts him under her control (even though the book didn't do anything to her). They have sex that I can only hope lasted longer than the description.
SPELL
It wasn't sexy because the spelling was so miserably atrocious. Seriously.
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