by scouries
Loved the story line, kind of wish it was me it happened to. The thought of haveing sex with mom and sis both is such a turn on.
You have great characters. Even though this story is somewhat of a stretch, it makes the reader wish for that better world where all of these things are possible. There is no crime when there is no coersion and sometimes rules made for the right reasons impede true happiness.
A wonderful love story! Only thing missing is the girlfriends baby and maybe her mothers.
I loved your story. I've been reading stories here for
years and yours is at the top of the list!!! I am going
to go read some of your other stories now. Very exciting!!
Thank you and keep writing!!!
thanks for the time you send writing these outstanding stories.merry christmas and happy new year to you and your family.i know it takes time,but give us more stories quicker.your fan from north carolina.
When I started reading it, the prose looked somewhat familiar. So I scrolled back up to see who the author was, and I knew I was in for a treat. I've been enjoying your stories for a long time now. You take the time to develop your characters and explore the camraderie and the romantic relationships between them. You describe the characters' physical appearances as the story progresses, often through dialog, which is better than the typical one paragraph "I'm a 38DD" style of description that a lot of writers tend to use. Although the situations are somewhat unrealistic, the somewhat realistic characters keep the stories grounded. The only negative thing that stood out to me was that the title could have been much better.
and although I would enjoy more of a seduction/erotic undressing/hotter description of the sex itself the story flows well. I wish there was more action and less conversation, but that is a small cavil for an overall excellent story. An easy "5".
if they are to be fun, erotic, and interesting needs to have all kinds of moments.
you could have as much sex scenes as you want --- in fact, some of the "authors" here write about nothing but sex and they are read by very few and commented by less --- but if you have no other moments, from the lighthearted to the somber/sober/serious as well as deep-felt sadness and sorrow and reflection,,,,, you don't have a story,,,,
one of the main objectives in fiction is to make fake things/stories real, or as real as possible.
you could have as much sex as you want, but it needs to be only a vehicle to carry the story through, not an end in itself:
because if that's the case, you have no story but PORN. there's nothing wrong with porn; it's just very boring if you see/read nothing but vaginas and penises and bodily fluids everywhere, from beginning to end,,,
Love should be accepted for exactly what it is no matter what the situation. You did that with your story. Very well done!
So well written, I found myself there, It was romantic, erotic, and a good love story all in one. I hope you write more, mmm mmm good.
Oh, my god You've done it again I don't think I'll ever find a writer I like better than you!!!!
This story is incredibly erotic and very beautiful. Too bad that this wouldn't work in the real world.
Nookiehunter
Scouries,
and told in your usual fine style. Thank You. Ronnie W.
While incest is abhorrent to most people, I found this story to be wonderfully sensuous and romantic. Three people in love finding that the only solution is incest. Who are we to condemn Chrissie, Patty and Bobby for the life style they have chosen? Another fine tale Scouries, keep them, and us, cumming!
Thank you for sharing your stories so willingly. I can't begin to explain how much I enjoy them. I find myself anxiously awaiting anything new, as I've read and re-read all that you've shared here. Please , keep writing.
erotic, tender, and so very much as it should be. Congratulations on a great story..
Adrienne
I know it sounds really weird, but it is a very touching story, it is also tabooed with incest, but love conquers all. Keep up the good story line.
In this era of quick sex, the buildup was great. Thanks for a good story, and keep writing!
Hi Jim another great story, I don't know how you do it.
Happy xmas and new year.
George
THIS WAS THE VERY BEST STORY THAT I HAD EVER READ ON THE SITE. GREAAAAT JOB, INCREDIBLE. MAN I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING, PLEASE KEEP WRITING THE STORIES LIKE THIS, FOR GOD'S SAKE!! CONGRATULATIONS! :DD
I CANT SAY HOW GOOD THIS STORY WAS. IT HAD THE RIGHT PACE AND EVERYTHING. KEEP IT GOIN. SHOULD HAVE ANOHTER CHAPTER OR TWO
This was erally well written. As a retired clergy and psychologist, I appreciate the excellent use of language. Very stmulating and moving. loved it a lot. Reader in DE
A well thought out, nicely written story. Very erotic, and I liked the ending, too. The dialog was a little stilted and unrealistidc once in a while, but that didn't keep me from enjoying the story. Keep up the good work.
Don't read many incest stories. Not really my thing. But this was really nicely put together: real love, not just lust.
this has got to be one of the best I have ever read and I thank you for takeing the time to write it.
Really nice family fuck story.Son fuck both elder sis and mom,
pregnated them and made them his wife.Fucking mom is nicely described.
I'm not of a fan of incest but your story is really delious you have an A+ and thumbs up from me. Everything was perfect. Well done my boy.
man this story was fkn crazyy.... loved the son fucking the older sis then the mom. Maddd storyy and the longer the story the betta.
keep em cumin'.. (literally :) )
I found this an extremely well written, excellent story. Just the right length and pace and wonderfully erotic. Off now to read your other submissions.
Bravo!" This was an extremely erotic and nicely written story-line. Even for an incest story! Great pace of lust to keep the reader continuously arroused!
Bravo!" This was an extremely erotic! A nicely written story-line. Even for an incest story! Great pace of lust to keep the reader continuously arroused!
he writes some of the most twistedly funny incest stories; in fact, he should be crowned as being "the best" when it comes to wrting the most flippant, facetious, yet seemingly inncoently "realistic" incest stories....
sometimes it is somewhat sad, sometimes it is funny, sometimes look serious, but all the time too they have twisted sense of "white noise" sureal reality to them.
Good story. Loved the bit when both mum & his sister got pregnant. Write some more like this with both women again getting put in the family way. Off to read more of your stories - hope I can find another where both girls are made pregnant
Thanks,
Julie
woa what an amazing story plot. this is the first story i actualy like. it keeps the reader aroused from start to end. love how they married themselves. seems very realistic. keep it up.
Well written. Could've used a bit of tension though between the girlfriend and her mother and Bobby's mother and sister. Otherwise, not bad, not bad at all.
A few puncuation issues, but all in all I enjoyed this naughty read. Good job. ~ Red
You write with such seemingly effortless flow that it kept me entranced throught the whole story...kudos.
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Probably gonna be one of my personal favorites. I have read twice already and I'm looking forward to reading it againa and again. I liked the character interaction and the just the overall writing. Sexy and fun. Thanks for writing a great and enjoyable story.
Jim is a masterful writer and has you hanging on his words.I didnt think he could surpass Daddy I wispered ......but its close.
Cant wait for more Keep it up JIM
Very good, though it could have used a more pronounced emphasis on the "No! No! No!.... Yes! Yes! Yes!" aspect of the story, as far as my interests go.
That story was amazing...it was so heart felt, and beautiful...I only wish that could happen for me, but my mom would never, and i don't have a sister.
Anyway, awesome story!!!
OUTSTANDING STORY i LOVED IT. PLEASE CONTINUE AS IT KEPT ME ON EDGE THE WHOLE WAY AND WAS MASTERLY WRITTEN........
THANK YOU FOR A WONDERFUL STORY......
this was such a great story my cock was hard whe whole time i was reading it. keep up the good work
This story was written with a great deal of thought and sensuality. I thought that it lacked subtlty or perhaps was rushed a bit when the story got to the point of the mother and sister giving in to the notion. Overall good effort ! Keep it up.
congratulations. well paced, sensitive, clever. I think you could write well in any genre
This is the best i have had the privelage of reading
I didn't read it all (yet) cause I was too tired and just wanted to go sleep, but after a bit over two pages, damn that's a hot story, I'll probably have to finish it tomorrow morning if I have time ;)
Thanks for sharing this erotic and captivating story. It's the best I've read in a long time. Please write more about these people. —jr
You need an editor for punctuation of dialog, if nothing else. Not a bad effort, but it doesn't deserve the high scores it's getting. I won't vote - I'd be too tempted to vote on the grammar and punctuation and not the story
you are one of the best writers on this site. this work, like all of your others, is xcellent!
My sisters and I loved your story. I have enjoyed my sisters for years with our mothers blessing.
A good story. A few little grammatical errors - and a bit long for my liking. You are a very good author.
I loved you story I wish I had a mom and a sister like that.
Wish my mom would have my baby
5 /5
Best story i've read in a very long time. A personal dream of mine in every way. WOW!
Thanks, Its nice to read a good sexy story about families who not only love (and make love to) one another, but cherish and respect each other. Nicely and intellegintly written and exrtremely sexy. Nice also to not have the brutality and vile language found in similar incest stories.
I'll look forward to more of your offerings.
Although I found this story arousing, it could have been shorter! Wilst I appreciate the fact that you are playing up to the CLIMAX it could have been done in record time..!! although a very hot story it was WAY too wordy, pick up the pace in the future!!
dont listen to anyone who says it was too long... some ppl just dontlike to read.. it was terrific.. had me hard and thrusting most of the way through... only had an older bro.. wish i had an older or younger sis... keep up the super work
i love this story....i'm sure bobby has cock size like mine cock ...haa great
plz can allow me to do sex with ur mom & sis. here is my e-mail ID ehi_grnv@rediffmail.com
if ur intrested plz send mail soon . dont feel by asking u that bad thing
i thought this was one of the best stories i have ever read, so sexy it had my panties damp from the start, ive always dreamt of this sort of situation and look forward to reading more of this and any other stories you have written, well done xx
I couldn't take my hand from my cock the whole time I read it. It made sooo horny.
this is a fantastic story!!! omg keep up the work, i think u should make some more >.< :P
one of the most well written erotic stories I've read... And I do mean erotic!! thanks, may your pen never run dry!!
okay so if the bothers name is bobby then why in the one part did you call him jimmy
This is the first story that's held my attention to the end. I liked the build up of sexual tension - it kept me reading
scouries, but been kind of busy the last few months. It's time to get caught up. Enjoyed this one as I've enjoyed all the others. Thank You. Ronnie W.
REALLY REALLY AWESOME THAT WAS SO LIKE SWEET AND SEXY AND HOT...KEEP IT CUMMING
WOW are the first words that came to mind. You had me riveted from the first story and though I planned to stop at the end of that one and then the second, I read all the way through to the end, remaining hard almost the entire time.
This is a sweet story that had some nice subtle twists. Hope you write more.
Greg
A wonderful story espicially mom getting pregnent. Keep up the good work.
Undoubtably the best I,ve ever read.I'm hopeful of seeing other of your writings!