Loved the story line, kind of wish it was me it happened to. The thought of haveing sex with mom and sis both is such a turn on.
You have great characters. Even though this story is somewhat of a stretch, it makes the reader wish for that better world where all of these things are possible. There is no crime when there is no coersion and sometimes rules made for the right reasons impede true happiness.
A wonderful love story! Only thing missing is the girlfriends baby and maybe her mothers.
I loved your story. I've been reading stories here for
years and yours is at the top of the list!!! I am going
to go read some of your other stories now. Very exciting!!
Thank you and keep writing!!!
thanks for the time you send writing these outstanding stories.merry christmas and happy new year to you and your family.i know it takes time,but give us more stories quicker.your fan from north carolina.
When I started reading it, the prose looked somewhat familiar. So I scrolled back up to see who the author was, and I knew I was in for a treat. I've been enjoying your stories for a long time now. You take the time to develop your characters and explore the camraderie and the romantic relationships between them. You describe the characters' physical appearances as the story progresses, often through dialog, which is better than the typical one paragraph "I'm a 38DD" style of description that a lot of writers tend to use. Although the situations are somewhat unrealistic, the somewhat realistic characters keep the stories grounded. The only negative thing that stood out to me was that the title could have been much better.
That was a ver good story. Please continue the great work.
I loved this story. Hope to read more like it from you.
and although I would enjoy more of a seduction/erotic undressing/hotter description of the sex itself the story flows well. I wish there was more action and less conversation, but that is a small cavil for an overall excellent story. An easy "5".
Can't wait till the nwxt chapters come along
if they are to be fun, erotic, and interesting needs to have all kinds of moments.
you could have as much sex scenes as you want --- in fact, some of the "authors" here write about nothing but sex and they are read by very few and commented by less --- but if you have no other moments, from the lighthearted to the somber/sober/serious as well as deep-felt sadness and sorrow and reflection,,,,, you don't have a story,,,,
one of the main objectives in fiction is to make fake things/stories real, or as real as possible.
you could have as much sex as you want, but it needs to be only a vehicle to carry the story through, not an end in itself:
because if that's the case, you have no story but PORN. there's nothing wrong with porn; it's just very boring if you see/read nothing but vaginas and penises and bodily fluids everywhere, from beginning to end,,,
Well written. I felt your passion and that of Mom and sister
Love should be accepted for exactly what it is no matter what the situation. You did that with your story. Very well done!
So well written, I found myself there, It was romantic, erotic, and a good love story all in one. I hope you write more, mmm mmm good.
Oh, my god You've done it again I don't think I'll ever find a writer I like better than you!!!!
that storie was soo hot i loved it it was romantic and very erotic
I love this Story. (Kiss 4 Writer)
This story is incredibly erotic and very beautiful. Too bad that this wouldn't work in the real world.
and told in your usual fine style. Thank You. Ronnie W.
While incest is abhorrent to most people, I found this story to be wonderfully sensuous and romantic. Three people in love finding that the only solution is incest. Who are we to condemn Chrissie, Patty and Bobby for the life style they have chosen? Another fine tale Scouries, keep them, and us, cumming!
Thank you for sharing your stories so willingly. I can't begin to explain how much I enjoy them. I find myself anxiously awaiting anything new, as I've read and re-read all that you've shared here. Please , keep writing.
erotic, tender, and so very much as it should be. Congratulations on a great story..
I know it sounds really weird, but it is a very touching story, it is also tabooed with incest, but love conquers all. Keep up the good story line.
In this era of quick sex, the buildup was great. Thanks for a good story, and keep writing!
Hi Jim another great story, I don't know how you do it.
Happy xmas and new year.
gr8 story, keep writing!
Could have made it little more pungent.
The pregnancy portion was wonderful, keep up the good work.
THIS WAS THE VERY BEST STORY THAT I HAD EVER READ ON THE SITE. GREAAAAT JOB, INCREDIBLE. MAN I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING, PLEASE KEEP WRITING THE STORIES LIKE THIS, FOR GOD'S SAKE!! CONGRATULATIONS! :DD
I CANT SAY HOW GOOD THIS STORY WAS. IT HAD THE RIGHT PACE AND EVERYTHING. KEEP IT GOIN. SHOULD HAVE ANOHTER CHAPTER OR TWO
This was erally well written. As a retired clergy and psychologist, I appreciate the excellent use of language. Very stmulating and moving. loved it a lot. Reader in DE
A well thought out, nicely written story. Very erotic, and I liked the ending, too. The dialog was a little stilted and unrealistidc once in a while, but that didn't keep me from enjoying the story. Keep up the good work.
Don't read many incest stories. Not really my thing. But this was really nicely put together: real love, not just lust.
this has got to be one of the best I have ever read and I thank you for takeing the time to write it.
Really nice family fuck story.Son fuck both elder sis and mom,
pregnated them and made them his wife.Fucking mom is nicely described.
I'm not of a fan of incest but your story is really delious you have an A+ and thumbs up from me. Everything was perfect. Well done my boy.
man this story was fkn crazyy.... loved the son fucking the older sis then the mom. Maddd storyy and the longer the story the betta.
keep em cumin'.. (literally :) )
Thanks nice story. Keep going
I found this an extremely well written, excellent story. Just the right length and pace and wonderfully erotic. Off now to read your other submissions.
Bravo!" This was an extremely erotic and nicely written story-line. Even for an incest story! Great pace of lust to keep the reader continuously arroused!
Bravo!" This was an extremely erotic! A nicely written story-line. Even for an incest story! Great pace of lust to keep the reader continuously arroused!
he writes some of the most twistedly funny incest stories; in fact, he should be crowned as being "the best" when it comes to wrting the most flippant, facetious, yet seemingly inncoently "realistic" incest stories....
sometimes it is somewhat sad, sometimes it is funny, sometimes look serious, but all the time too they have twisted sense of "white noise" sureal reality to them.
it was rolling all the way to the end nice job
Good story. Loved the bit when both mum & his sister got pregnant. Write some more like this with both women again getting put in the family way. Off to read more of your stories - hope I can find another where both girls are made pregnant
woa what an amazing story plot. this is the first story i actualy like. it keeps the reader aroused from start to end. love how they married themselves. seems very realistic. keep it up.
Well written. Could've used a bit of tension though between the girlfriend and her mother and Bobby's mother and sister. Otherwise, not bad, not bad at all.
A few puncuation issues, but all in all I enjoyed this naughty read. Good job. ~ Red
You write with such seemingly effortless flow that it kept me entranced throught the whole story...kudos.
great work, loved it. 7 outta 5 kept me hard
I loved it! Your words were most sensual. Keep up the great work!!!
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