"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned

Ok I know this is going to sound like a 14 year old kid typed it but I came 4 times from this story. It was amazing to read. The way you described each person greatly helped in the visualization. I would love to read more.

Holy fuck!

That was fucking incredible. Enjoyed the story, but that ending was a lil' bit too much for me. Great dialogue, great scenes. Wish there was a bit more to the story though. A few more scenes would've been perfect.

great story

i loved the story one of the best i have read great plot and wonderful ending please keep writing.

Wonderful!

This is a very kinky, and hot story, I gave it five stars!

too good

I think of this story in real but my mom and sis won't allow that

Great story

Greatest story I've ever read and I loved every bit of it. Your should write more stories. Maybe make a book but keep going with these people. Make a series, that would be cool. I've never found a literatica series.

Very good story I liked it very much, Please write to concoude this one How kids did end up having .

Great!

Great work I love the whole storyline. I really think you should do one where it's 10 years later and the had more kids and the kids started to fuck the parents and so on, it would be great read. And with your artistic taste of story writing im sure you can make that idea turn out to be a masterpiece.

One more thing

Additionally, your writing style could use a bit more work. When referring to the characters from another character's point of view you used a direction that didn't really fit. For instance you were writing from Patty's perspective talking about Chrissie as being Bobby's mother. Could just say 'their mother'. That way it fits better. If you're going for the omnipotent perspective, like you were writing, absolutes work well there, also.
Can't wait to read more of your work.
Scale

interesting

and complicated incest tale-very erotic, good sex scenes thanks

Mr anonymous needs to stop reading if he doesn't like your style as for myself I Looooooooooooooooooooove it please continue

Fuck thats all i can say that was wonderful i cumed like 4 times thanks

Kudos!

One of the best of the best!

ThankYouVeryMuch!!

beautiful

Just beautiful

Beautiful Story

Thanks, for such a touching and beautifully written story. Though I don't wish to go into details, it hits very close to home, and the heart. A continuation would be great.
Thanks,

Great Story

Kept me hard the whole time I was reading it

great story

Keep writithese, they're fricking good

Sweet...

I gotta go take care of sum thin...

Damn!

This made me sooooo wet....kept me cumming till the end, I loved it!

A very loving/caring story

Thanks for a very wonderful story - I am a husband in very similar circumstances

Still one of the best!

I've read this story many times and still think it's one of your best and one of the best on this site. Please keep writing.

Gross

I can't believe people are turned on by this.

My turn

I have just began a similar sexual relationship......cannot get enough

Really good one of the best I've read!!!

Friend Jake, his wife and Me (Gerry).

I just loved that story and sure wish that I could have ben that lucky.
I must tell you that I am a male and I just met a really great married guy who I love to suck. At first I used to get him to fuck his wife and then come over to my place and let me suck him with both their juices still on his cock. Well now we are all three moved in together and reaslly enjoying each other. We plan on having a child as soon as possible. Money is not a factor.

Beautiful

I always wonder if the beautiful sexual unions are fictional or real. Some probably are biographical and some fictional. You tell it so well. I choose to believe that it really happened and one of them felt compelled to share it. I wished for something similar when I was young.

MOMMY DAUGHTER

The only thing missing was a little mommy daughter action. Very hot story

Oh Mommy! ! ! !

I was enthralled with this tory.
I perhaps could have fucked my mother, but I'm not positive. She was an alcoholic who lived for her beer. She was a terrible mother who passed at age thirty eight from uremic poisoning.
She finally coerced my daddy into getting her a chamber pot so she didn't have to go upstairs to pee. Sometimes I had to help he walk twenty feet to the pot so she could pee. She was so drunk she would have fallen down. I saw her pussy a lot of times and she seldom wore panties. They just got in the way when she needed to pee.
Onr night she was in here bed reading and drinking beer when I came in. She, for ssome reason, haad on a cut out bra, garter belt and full fashioned stocking and an opaque yellow nightgown, but no panties. She asked me to give her a back rub.
I had her roll on her stomach, told her I was unhooking her bra and garter belt so I could rub all of her back. I took lotion and warmed it in my hands and proceeded to begin rubbing her back. I even went down to her upper thighs just above her stocking tops. I asked her if she wanted her butt massaged too. She told me to go ahead, so I rubbed her ass and slipped my hands down onto the inside of her thighs. She just told me to be careful.
I asked her if she wanted her belly rubbed too and she thought for a minute and said that would feel good too. Whn she turned over, her teats fell out of her cut out bra and I saw her cunt close up. I began massaging her belly, then moved up to her teats, then down to her lower belly. She parted her legs and told me I could rub her cunt if I wanted to.I played with her hair and her cunt lips then told her I was done.
she simply told me I did a good job and it felt very good She turned back ove I ad I re hooked her garter belt, but she told me to leave her bra unhooked and took it off. I think I really could have given her a good fucking that night. I'll never know because I didn't.

Absolutely so hot. If that wouldn't turn you on, I don't know what it would take. Makes me wish I had a brother so we could fuck.....and fuck......and fuck.

Effing hot

Dude your a good writer. To be honest though could've been a little more clear on who was talking. And just for future references ALOT of Americans read these so try saying mom instead of mum and edit a little better. Other than that, this was one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Thanks for the experience man,

All fiction comes from truth.
I know for a fact, this story has happen all over the world at different times,
in the past, and it does happen in the present.

Good

Awsome hot story please follow up with more of this story maybe him fucking his daughter in a few years

Early days of incest

Great story. As an innocent teen I spent a Labor Day weekend at my aunts house at the Thousand Islands. More people than figured showed for the holiday so I slept in my Aunt's bedroom. She came in to get dressed as I was standing there naked and she became my first. This is the first time I have said anything about this, and she was always eager for me to visit summer after summer till I got married.

Can't wait

You really need a follow up because this story was so good I cried. And fucked myself, then cried some more.

THANKYOU

That was amazing! I am a boy and I have always had sexual fantaseize about my mother and sister. My dad left when I was nine and my sister was six so now that I'm older I found it easier to suduce my mom. This story gave me the courage to tell my sister and mom about my sexual fantasies and now I am the happiest I have ever been because I now live with my mom and sister and I fuck them everyday, so THANKYOU and keep writing!!

i got them

I fucked my mom and sister not together but years apart. My sister knows about my mom but my mom don't know about my sister. it was fun!!

great story

Makes me want to try and seduce my older sister. I've fantasized about doing it with her for a couple of years now. But yeah you should make a follow up story though.

Anonymous

So fucking hot

Yes!!!

I ate my sister out all night

An oldie but a goodie. Very hot and sexy. Could stand to have a good editor run through it, though, and tidy up some of the errors. There were a number of grammatical mistakes along with Patty calling her brother "Jimmy" instead of "Bobby".

I will never look at my brother the same again...I like that ;)

Loved this story !!!!

I remembered reading this story some time ago. Imagine 642 comments. I did not go thru all of them but the majority seems well in your favor. My compliments, again.

Thanks Don

Lost in time

I really enjoyed your story. I could picture the beach, the women in their full splender. God it turned me on overload. Thank you, again great job.

i will never look at my sisters the same ever again... oh well... its s not so bad ;)

NIce one , very well narrated , words oozing out with love , sex and passion...

Excelent!!

This was truely amazing!! Never read anything like it. My compliments!!

Just as good again

I read this a few years ago, but it's just as good the second time. Your pacing is perfect, and character development is great.

I've always been impressed by your stories. I hope you have written mainstream, as well.

Caringly sensual

Softly and most sensualy written, giving a believable and enjoyable story.

And the moral to this story......

Love is love and shouldn't be ignored or taken lightly. For it's the greatest gift we small beings are bestowed, and is best when shared. Spread the Love.

family family man

Excellent well wrîtten thought out story I enjoyed it so much