Its a very sexy story, written with good grammar thus making it an easy and more enjoyable read. One criticism though, regarding smoking the joint, you said, ....'everyone tries it at least once.' I didn't; and I was a teeanger through the 'hippy days' of The Swinging Sixties. As a life-long 'non-smoker' I find it incongruous to imagine any non-smoker even trying a joint. More commonly non-smokers find the actual act of smoking so repugnant they/we wouldn't, couldn't, even contemplate the act. Sorry, I got carried away. That aside though I loved your sexy, well written, story. Regards from SouthLondon.
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Anonymous07/24/14
horny aussie
I've read this story a while back and I loved it then and still love it, it would be one of my best stories that I've got around to reading, but one complaint like from South Londoner, even though I'm a smoker I've never had a joint, the smell of them was bad enough so i never had the urge to try one. But other than that no other worries from me.
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Anonymous08/02/14
Thoughts
The two complainers about the joint smoking need to remember that comments made by a character in a story are just that. I certainly never have smoked one and don't advocate it either, but a story is a story and writers of murder mysteries don't normally get flack for putting murderous thoughts in a character's head! My only thought about the story is that the characters were only thinly sketched out, and there was a lot of room for fleshing them out much more and expanding on their thoughts, both of which can add enormously to the eroticism of the writing. A sexy read nonetheless. Thank you.
You are a excellent author wonderful writer
Thanks
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Anonymous08/17/14
I'm not a hater......... But
This was an amazing story. It was written unbelievably well, although I wish you could've added a little more sex and been more descriptive of it. Also, when I think about it this story kind of weirdly haunts me knowing that these people are being controlled by sex, wanting only sex forever and always, like some sort of Greek legend or curse. I guess I can't really call it a curse because it is what they want, but I'm wondering if it's really what they want or if it's the pleasure controlling them and I guess that it feels unjust to leave the story on this note; people stuck in a trance not being able to do the things they might rather be doing and living their life the way they would've preferred.
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Anonymous08/28/14
Good story, even if unbelievable
You made a very sexy read. I was very turned on reading the story no matter that it was an improbable story. The sisters part was slightly more of a better progression. Adding the mom was a stretch of the imagination, especially the double wives arrangement. Also the characters could be better fleshed out. Overall a great story and I gave it 5 stars!
I too read this story sometime ago and gave it 5 stars, only because I couldn't give it 10 stars...... It's got the two hottest incest fantasies in one story.... I used to dream about this even before I knew it was incest because both my mother and sister were hot and I would have "married" them both and lived happily ever after but there was my little brother and my father so it could have never happened.
However, I still dream about it even though today I'm Bi and most of the sex I have is gay but that's simply because it's easier to have a man visit you or you visit a man and no one really thinks anything about it, unless they happen to be inside the house at the same time. Of course the same is true of women visiting women.
I still read mother/son and sister/brother incest over 50 years later and it still gets me excited. And this story is still one of the best I've read.
One of the most exciting story that I ever read. Had a hard on almost the entire story.
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Anonymous09/10/14
10/10 - IGN
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Anonymous09/14/14
me too
I too wish there were a scale of 10. But, I'll just say its one I've really enjoyed. You've written some about rape, which caused me to be very disappointed in you. But this is well done. Their characters seem to get along very well, even though their sexual desires are the ones primarily explored here. I can see a mother and daughter shareing a man. Mommy can love him deeply and fearlessly knowing that her daughter will have a good father and that when she's gone, (as she must know she will die first) her love will not be left alone. Obviously, they are sexually very compatible and are very open minded to any topic. The daughter, Patty, (surprisingly) seems to be the most conservative of the group instead of the Mommy- or Chrissie. Patty will probably be the stabilizing force that will hold this unusual family together. This is a wonderful story. Thank You.
though none of us would want that to happen in our life. still you made me the male character and made me fall in love with sister with my mother's permission. lol.
great piece of art. heart touching really
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Anonymous09/20/14
Hot ! But, believeable?
Although, I knew a kid in high school who was supposedly fucking his sister and his mother. I also knew, maybe 10 other or so people throughout my life who were involved in incest.
A lot of unusual things happen in the world of incest. I just would never would count out any variation in that world.
I bet that most males have lusted after their mothers and/or sisters. Not everyone is fortunate to find their soul mates in them. Nice story. Pleasant people and it seems this family will work out ok. It's not a foregone conclusion that mom will die first. With car wrecks and stuff, anyone can go first. In this family, the children still have two adults left.
While a bit far fetched, it's not out of the realm of possibility. People are just crazy enough to get together like this and crazy enough to make it work. Good job.
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Anonymous09/29/14
Great Story Poorly Developed Characters
I loved your story but you could have taken more time to develop your characters. Some of the early part of it seemed contrived and almost coincidental to your story line. There was so much more you could have done with it to make it an even better read.
'"Ohhh...Mommy", I Moaned" - Coursey Family: Christine (Chrissie) and Patty and Bobby - Thirty-six Year Old Mother and Nineteen Year Old Daughter/Sister and Eighteen Year Old Son/Brother).
(S)couries has, as is usual, outdone himself once again. The Coursey family is united in love, committment, oaths, spirit and souls! The matriarch of the family is Christine, the core of their love, the center of their universe; she greases the three-spoke wheel of their mutual beings. This story is not about lust, wantonness, sluttiness nor lewd pornography! It is about romance and a family "wedded" for life and dedicated to their unity, family and each other!
Mother Christine and her son Bobby are new parents, mother and father, of Stephanie, the third child of mother Chrissie and second sibling of Bobby and Patty, the daughter of Bobby and (and also his mother) Chrissie, sister of Bobby and Patty, granddaughter of Chrissie and niece of Patty (whow)! Expectedly, Chrissie's daughter and Bobby's sister Patty is now pregnant by her brother Bobby as the father; maybe she'll have twins in about seven or so months!!
The writer has written a very good saga of this illuminating family. the character's are cast in pleasurable roles and play their parts exceptionally. The dialogue is also very well written; the context and theme of the story is somewhat unusual allowing some believeability and reality of the story. Another gigantic hit by 'scouries', for myself and nearly seven hundred other commenting Literotica mother/son, brother/sister procreation, incest-loving readers!!!
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Anonymous10/11/14
is this someone elses ?
I've read this story a couple of years ago but by someone else
Incest can be the greatest love between the sexes. This story is a classic
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Anonymous01/22/15
I was rock hard reading it and shot a huge load of cum as my thoughts drifted.
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Anonymous01/25/15
good story
a lot of true love involved in it.
do you have a follow up story on the three and there children
Ron Texas cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
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Anonymous01/26/15
LOVED IT
i think this story is my favorite. i've read it at least a hundred times. i hope u post more stories. i read your stories always.your my favorite author
This was pretty decent. The sex scene wasn't that hot...but sex is hard to write,but I liked the teasing the easy feeling,the conversation... You portrayed emotion and character well. Got me stiff.
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Anonymous03/01/15
Yeowzurs
Lol Then Fuck Me 13 Inches XD
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Anonymous03/01/15
Yeowzurs
Lol Then Fuck Me 13 Inches XD
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Anonymous03/10/15
Retard babies
Maybe this story doesn't really apply to the real world, but, if that ever happened, both of the children would be mentally and/or physically disabled.. Besides that, it was a good story. i guess it's a good thing that you didn't decide to make your characters have retard babies, it's good to stick to the fairy-tale side of things sometimes.
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Anonymous03/24/15
sexy!
Yummy! It was delicious!
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Anonymous03/24/15
jealousy
I got a little jealous when he wanted to pick the mother over patty!
Great fantasy. Good build up, not repetitious, intelligently written, and hot in the right places.
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Anonymous04/11/15
wonderful
This is a wonderful story. A little quick on the draw, but they all evidently knew what they wanted. You know, contrary to what a previous commentor said, the children of incest today have little chance of disability. Many years ago, when the world was 'smaller', People in a given geographical area were often more closely related than today. In today's world, bloodlines are not so linear. Remember our ancestors who landed on Ellis Island came from literally all over the world and many before that who landed in various places on the east coast from wherever. It also takes more than one instance of incest to begin producing troubles in the gene pool. I really want to squash the idea that love between family members immediately produces deformity. Its just not so. Chrissy and Patty are obviously very much in love with Bobby and he them. Though it probably isn't, I'd like to hope that this is at least based on a true to life family.
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Anonymous04/24/15
Delightful,delicious!
More please
by
Anonymous04/29/15
BACK AGAIN!!!
At least the third or fourth time, I've read it! It gets hotter every time, so I go back to your story list and enjoy even more of your tales!
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Anonymous05/19/15
A Little Extra
Could you maybe do something in the future about the baby Steph growing up in that environment and also maybe have it so that Bobby has sex with her.
would really like an non erotic story were they tell their children whne they are of age about their relationship.
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Anonymous06/14/15
close family
wish I had family could get this close would love to unite together never desire my mom but have a sister have always wanted to be with just like this
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Anonymous06/19/15
Missing any logic/indactors - virgin to wife in one nite???
Lots of foreplay leading up to the event then it was slam-bam, sis & mom, and both becoming his wife and pregnant with no prelude into this mindset progression. From virgin to wife in near lightening speed, unreal, missing much.
And all these incest family pregnancies stories never address how the new baby birth certificate (listing father) is handled. Unreal.
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Anonymous06/25/15
Holy Jesus
I loved it and I never even though about doin incest until last week then I had f***** my cousin and man was it good just reading this story takes me off in to a deep high like nothing else could . In a one word description WOW.
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Anonymous06/27/15
Hot Damn
Dear Writer,
The name is Thorn Woods. I have to say this story was fúcking AMAZING. I find incest stories so interesting. I don’t know why but they seem just so hot and erotic and make my body feel all tingly, lmao. I don’t know if you have ever heard the website/app called Wattpad. That’s where I write my stories and erotic one shots. I have no idea if you’re going to read this let alone see it but you should totally check out the site. I think you’ll love it as much as I do. If you’d ever like to contact me my email is GoddessOfMaddness@gmail.com.
English
I loved this very sexy story.
Its a very sexy story, written with good grammar thus making it an easy and more enjoyable read. One criticism though, regarding smoking the joint, you said, ....'everyone tries it at least once.' I didn't; and I was a teeanger through the 'hippy days' of The Swinging Sixties. As a life-long 'non-smoker' I find it incongruous to imagine any non-smoker even trying a joint. More commonly non-smokers find the actual act of smoking so repugnant they/we wouldn't, couldn't, even contemplate the act. Sorry, I got carried away. That aside though I loved your sexy, well written, story. Regards from SouthLondon.
horny aussie
I've read this story a while back and I loved it then and still love it, it would be one of my best stories that I've got around to reading, but one complaint like from South Londoner, even though I'm a smoker I've never had a joint, the smell of them was bad enough so i never had the urge to try one. But other than that no other worries from me.
Thoughts
The two complainers about the joint smoking need to remember that comments made by a character in a story are just that. I certainly never have smoked one and don't advocate it either, but a story is a story and writers of murder mysteries don't normally get flack for putting murderous thoughts in a character's head! My only thought about the story is that the characters were only thinly sketched out, and there was a lot of room for fleshing them out much more and expanding on their thoughts, both of which can add enormously to the eroticism of the writing. A sexy read nonetheless. Thank you.
awesome story
This is a wonderful story and I love it
Thank you
You are a excellent author wonderful writer
Thanks
I'm not a hater......... But
This was an amazing story. It was written unbelievably well, although I wish you could've added a little more sex and been more descriptive of it. Also, when I think about it this story kind of weirdly haunts me knowing that these people are being controlled by sex, wanting only sex forever and always, like some sort of Greek legend or curse. I guess I can't really call it a curse because it is what they want, but I'm wondering if it's really what they want or if it's the pleasure controlling them and I guess that it feels unjust to leave the story on this note; people stuck in a trance not being able to do the things they might rather be doing and living their life the way they would've preferred.
Good story, even if unbelievable
You made a very sexy read. I was very turned on reading the story no matter that it was an improbable story. The sisters part was slightly more of a better progression. Adding the mom was a stretch of the imagination, especially the double wives arrangement. Also the characters could be better fleshed out. Overall a great story and I gave it 5 stars!
Ohhhhhhh Mommie
I too read this story sometime ago and gave it 5 stars, only because I couldn't give it 10 stars...... It's got the two hottest incest fantasies in one story.... I used to dream about this even before I knew it was incest because both my mother and sister were hot and I would have "married" them both and lived happily ever after but there was my little brother and my father so it could have never happened.
However, I still dream about it even though today I'm Bi and most of the sex I have is gay but that's simply because it's easier to have a man visit you or you visit a man and no one really thinks anything about it, unless they happen to be inside the house at the same time. Of course the same is true of women visiting women.
I still read mother/son and sister/brother incest over 50 years later and it still gets me excited. And this story is still one of the best I've read.
Please keep writing like this........
Oh mommy I groaned
One of the most exciting story that I ever read. Had a hard on almost the entire story.
10/10 - IGN
me too
I too wish there were a scale of 10. But, I'll just say its one I've really enjoyed. You've written some about rape, which caused me to be very disappointed in you. But this is well done. Their characters seem to get along very well, even though their sexual desires are the ones primarily explored here. I can see a mother and daughter shareing a man. Mommy can love him deeply and fearlessly knowing that her daughter will have a good father and that when she's gone, (as she must know she will die first) her love will not be left alone. Obviously, they are sexually very compatible and are very open minded to any topic. The daughter, Patty, (surprisingly) seems to be the most conservative of the group instead of the Mommy- or Chrissie. Patty will probably be the stabilizing force that will hold this unusual family together. This is a wonderful story. Thank You.
comment
though none of us would want that to happen in our life. still you made me the male character and made me fall in love with sister with my mother's permission. lol.
great piece of art. heart touching really
Hot ! But, believeable?
Although, I knew a kid in high school who was supposedly fucking his sister and his mother. I also knew, maybe 10 other or so people throughout my life who were involved in incest.
A lot of unusual things happen in the world of incest. I just would never would count out any variation in that world.
People are Crazy?
I bet that most males have lusted after their mothers and/or sisters. Not everyone is fortunate to find their soul mates in them. Nice story. Pleasant people and it seems this family will work out ok. It's not a foregone conclusion that mom will die first. With car wrecks and stuff, anyone can go first. In this family, the children still have two adults left.
While a bit far fetched, it's not out of the realm of possibility. People are just crazy enough to get together like this and crazy enough to make it work. Good job.
Great Story Poorly Developed Characters
I loved your story but you could have taken more time to develop your characters. Some of the early part of it seemed contrived and almost coincidental to your story line. There was so much more you could have done with it to make it an even better read.
Good luck with your future writing endeavors
damon
'"Ohhh...Mommy", I Moaned" - Coursey Family: Christine (Chrissie) and Patty and Bobby - Thirty-six Year Old Mother and Nineteen Year Old Daughter/Sister and Eighteen Year Old Son/Brother).
(S)couries has, as is usual, outdone himself once again. The Coursey family is united in love, committment, oaths, spirit and souls! The matriarch of the family is Christine, the core of their love, the center of their universe; she greases the three-spoke wheel of their mutual beings. This story is not about lust, wantonness, sluttiness nor lewd pornography! It is about romance and a family "wedded" for life and dedicated to their unity, family and each other!
Mother Christine and her son Bobby are new parents, mother and father, of Stephanie, the third child of mother Chrissie and second sibling of Bobby and Patty, the daughter of Bobby and (and also his mother) Chrissie, sister of Bobby and Patty, granddaughter of Chrissie and niece of Patty (whow)! Expectedly, Chrissie's daughter and Bobby's sister Patty is now pregnant by her brother Bobby as the father; maybe she'll have twins in about seven or so months!!
The writer has written a very good saga of this illuminating family. the character's are cast in pleasurable roles and play their parts exceptionally. The dialogue is also very well written; the context and theme of the story is somewhat unusual allowing some believeability and reality of the story. Another gigantic hit by 'scouries', for myself and nearly seven hundred other commenting Literotica mother/son, brother/sister procreation, incest-loving readers!!!
is this someone elses ?
I've read this story a couple of years ago but by someone else
wow...very romantic and hot at the same time.
i also have read this one on another site...xhamster...
sensul beutful
Perfect for me.
Sweet
Your doing a gray job keeping us wanting more keep it up
Another great one, Scouries.
Jack
Whoa, what a dream!
real or not
At this point I dont care if the story has any truth to it .I just liked how it kept me hard as a rock keep it up as I am .....great writing
Very Hot!
I remember my Dreams
that baby shit was to much .....crazy .
that baby shit was to much .....crazy . and your my wife now...lol 2 stars
who is
JIMMY!
????
real.. or not... Who really understands love?
I thought the story was very erotic and loving...
Love Story
Incest can be the greatest love between the sexes. This story is a classic
I was rock hard reading it and shot a huge load of cum as my thoughts drifted.
good story
a lot of true love involved in it.
do you have a follow up story on the three and there children
Ron Texas cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
LOVED IT
i think this story is my favorite. i've read it at least a hundred times. i hope u post more stories. i read your stories always.your my favorite author
Awsome
A+
A*
wonderful story
one of the best i have ever read i hope you add more to the story later it was full of love passion and feelings over all a great story
Paidagee
ooh my gosh, feel lyk i wanna fuck some1
This was pretty decent. The sex scene wasn't that hot...but sex is hard to write,but I liked the teasing the easy feeling,the conversation... You portrayed emotion and character well. Got me stiff.
Yeowzurs
Lol Then Fuck Me 13 Inches XD
Yeowzurs
Lol Then Fuck Me 13 Inches XD
Retard babies
Maybe this story doesn't really apply to the real world, but, if that ever happened, both of the children would be mentally and/or physically disabled.. Besides that, it was a good story. i guess it's a good thing that you didn't decide to make your characters have retard babies, it's good to stick to the fairy-tale side of things sometimes.
sexy!
Yummy! It was delicious!
jealousy
I got a little jealous when he wanted to pick the mother over patty!
Excellent
Great fantasy. Good build up, not repetitious, intelligently written, and hot in the right places.
wonderful
This is a wonderful story. A little quick on the draw, but they all evidently knew what they wanted. You know, contrary to what a previous commentor said, the children of incest today have little chance of disability. Many years ago, when the world was 'smaller', People in a given geographical area were often more closely related than today. In today's world, bloodlines are not so linear. Remember our ancestors who landed on Ellis Island came from literally all over the world and many before that who landed in various places on the east coast from wherever. It also takes more than one instance of incest to begin producing troubles in the gene pool. I really want to squash the idea that love between family members immediately produces deformity. Its just not so. Chrissy and Patty are obviously very much in love with Bobby and he them. Though it probably isn't, I'd like to hope that this is at least based on a true to life family.
Delightful,delicious!
More please
BACK AGAIN!!!
At least the third or fourth time, I've read it! It gets hotter every time, so I go back to your story list and enjoy even more of your tales!
A Little Extra
Could you maybe do something in the future about the baby Steph growing up in that environment and also maybe have it so that Bobby has sex with her.
I love it!
All it needs is something with Steph
love it
would really like an non erotic story were they tell their children whne they are of age about their relationship.
close family
wish I had family could get this close would love to unite together never desire my mom but have a sister have always wanted to be with just like this
Missing any logic/indactors - virgin to wife in one nite???
Lots of foreplay leading up to the event then it was slam-bam, sis & mom, and both becoming his wife and pregnant with no prelude into this mindset progression. From virgin to wife in near lightening speed, unreal, missing much.
And all these incest family pregnancies stories never address how the new baby birth certificate (listing father) is handled. Unreal.
Holy Jesus
I loved it and I never even though about doin incest until last week then I had f***** my cousin and man was it good just reading this story takes me off in to a deep high like nothing else could . In a one word description WOW.
Hot Damn
Dear Writer,
The name is Thorn Woods. I have to say this story was fúcking AMAZING. I find incest stories so interesting. I don’t know why but they seem just so hot and erotic and make my body feel all tingly, lmao. I don’t know if you have ever heard the website/app called Wattpad. That’s where I write my stories and erotic one shots. I have no idea if you’re going to read this let alone see it but you should totally check out the site. I think you’ll love it as much as I do. If you’d ever like to contact me my email is GoddessOfMaddness@gmail.com.
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