"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned

Loved it but...

I loved it. The seduction was beautiful but I can't help feeling you became bored with or eager to end the story by the last page and rushed through the sex. Still an enjoyable read.

Fantastic

Great story, close to believable, Hope you write more

Great Story

Thanks for the share. It was very well written and you did a good job of character development.

Best of the Best

This is the kind of story I search and search for. It has literally every key element I look for. I mean this as a compliment of the highest order...it reads like some of my story ideas. Please, write more stories like this one.

The children are inbreed's....pele

If incest breeds strange children

someone needs to explain such to some of my childhood neighbors. The children developed normally, graduated high school, attended higher education schools, had handsome male and female children of their own, grandchildren, the last I knew. not one was ever a problem medically or emotionally. This is more than one such family I've known during my lifetime and all are fine. Hell, how was it for the bible people to explain not only of Adam and Eve, but Lot and his daughters, Noah and his family, etc. Rulers and other royal familes of Egypt, Rome and other such countries seemed to produce without 15 toes or fingers on either place. Nice and rounded story and fun to read this five star pages.

Family

Love.

incredible

This is an incredible story of love

Excellent

Well done. A perfect example of how love true love knows no boundaries not even those of blood.

thank you

That was a very sexy tale and made me very hard
Will enjoy myself now. Thanks

Mate, best one ive read so far

One of the best. made me and my girlfriend cum numerous times

LOVE FUCKING MOM AND SISTER MMMMMMMMMMM

I HAVE JUST JERKED OFF AND IT WAS FANTASTIC FOR ME. I WOULD LOVE TOBE THE YOUNG SON AND BROTHER. I COULD FUCK FOR A LIFETIME.
I HAD A SISTER THAT WANTED ME BUT I WAS TOO FAR AWAY. I STILL THINK ABOUT IT. SHE USED TO SUCK MY DICK WHEN I WAS AYOUNGSTER AND SHE LOVED IT

Exceptional

thankyou for this extremely erotic tale,

Very erotic

Loved it! Keep them cumming!

Couldn't be better

Awsome story just wished it were me.

How I love mother and son and son and daughter incest love stories

My turn

I've read this several times and never get tired of reading it. Were that it be true and that I could be the son/brother.

A threesome of unequal relationships

Five stars for this delightful story of lust, love, and beauty. Well done.

Lovely story

What a truly lovely sexual story , I got so excited reading a story with no inhibitions , my cock was hard from beginning to end. Xxxxx

Accolades

Made me cum it was so good!! You're great!! I'd love to talk with you about other story ideas.... And maybe if you are into it we could do some Internet writing rp? I dunno... You can reach me on Skype at zukonium. I look forward to talking to you... Code word is vampire.... I know weird... But it works... I'll read some of you're other stories and I didn't notice very many mistakes either.

Super hot!

Great story, loved reading it. Made me super horny.

Oh Mommy

Great story! A must read!

Loving Completely

This story is very great reading. I only wish I had pictures to go with at least part of it.
The fantasies in my mind and down to my crotch, with my cock jumping at some of the thoughts expressed and imagined were and are exhilirating. Come and visit me as often as you'ld like.
Congratulations,

My Thoughts

Very Well Written!!

I love my mom when she gets vocal.

Maybe I should mention that it's my cock that makes her vocal. Her moaning and groaning only increases my desire to fuck her even harder. It turns me on so much when she says my name, along with many other things, as she comes.

Good

Very good writing and very very hot, keep writing these hot stories.

As Good The 5th time as it was the 1st time.....

Exactly the type of story I love to read. Very well written.

Beautiful

I read every word of it, normallY I miss some out

Driving me crazy

I pushed my finger inside when I read it... oh my God I was horny a lot... I dont know about mom I definitely need u bro... plz cum inside me, I too want to miss my periods...

Yeah, family fucking is great. Moms should encourage their sons to breed them and it's just sad that there wasn't a husband/dad to fuck and breed Patty

yes

good jacking off story

make a book collection.

genius,genius ,genius

Incest is great but...

Those kids are gonna be so confused about their lives and their gonna get picked on. Not to mention they're inbred. I mean if I'm gonna fuck my own cuzzo I wouldn't try to get preggers because most of u slutz sayin " I wish my hot brother would give me his cum for the baby'" can't even take care of yourselves.

Beautiful

Your story was beautiful, I genuinely loved it.

wow

I really liked this Story, is something wrong with me.

Your stories are so hot!

I love the depth and character in your stories, but especially they make me hard as a rock! I always end up playing with myself by the last page. I hope that pleases you! Thank you so much!

beautiful story

iloved it please keep writing it brought a tear to my eye

CUMMED THRICE

I fucked my gf at d same time, reading dis story.... U are a magnificient writer

GREAT STORY

WHAT A GREAT STORY. IT GOT ME HARD SEVERAL TIMES JUST READING THIS GREAT STORY.

absolutwly well written. just my kind of story. AMAZING!

Awesome!

HAPPILY EVER AFTER - CLICHE DON'T YOU THINK???

This was a nice fairy tale. It was erotic, but it was flawed. I can't help but notice the errors and non sequiturs:
University (university)
fist string of sticky cum (first)
mothers family (mother’s)
when he as fourteen (was)
giving the two women their privacy and he his freedom (him)
b-b-q-ed (bbqed)
he held his streaming hose over the toilet. Felt himself hardening (hardening while peeing HMMM???)
Half way (Halfway)
no ones even (one’s)
took the roach (ONE HIT, NO MATTER HOW BIG, DOES NOT MAKE A JOINT A ROACH)
a half inch long butt (THAT IS A ROACH!!!!)
he lifter her (lifted)
sisters tightening insides (sister’s)
He rode Patty hard this third time (WHEN WAS THE SECOND TIME????)
Then (he) could feel her
he promised his wife (WHEN DID THEY MARRY????)
(He) (-L)(l)oved it
orgasming her need of him (CLUMSILY EXPRESSED)
suns just coming up (sun’s)
As with most of the better authors on this site the writing is top-notch, but the mechanics make a otherwise excellent story seem like a first draft instead. The promise is there, in spades. The fulfillment is not. Get a competent editor and improve the already high quality of your work.

Enticing and sexy

I love this story! Makes me wish I had two women like that...

will there be another on

i'd like to know their doing so far as one

Nice

Girls look sexy when they r nude. There4 girls should never wear dress a at any place like school, college, office home and that boy should be allowed to fuck girls as much he likes & enjoy their moms too .

Wonderful story

Awesome

Too good.....let society get back to hell.....or heaven.......very errotic and thought provoking

Threesome Delights

Enjoyable and well written, even with the known ending it was truly a terrific read.

Great Story

This is my absolute favorite kind of story. Thank you for writing this. 5/5

Loving mom and sis

Finally a good story that I can relate to.In your story, son gets mom pregnant and she delivers a baby girl and son is in the process of getting his sister pregnant. This is almost exactly what happened in my case. I gor my mother pregnant two times before my sister realized what was going on between mom and me and wanted in on the action. We got together and sis got pregnant with the first of 4 children with me. Mother also had 4 children with me and we finally stopped cuz 11 children was becoming too many to handle. I have a brother too. Dad was never wise to the situation,

Truly a well written story

So well written , a true tail of forbidden love capped by the making of a new family