All Comments on 'Till Death'

Great writing, and a great twist at the end. Loved it.

Spectacular

I've never flamed before but this is pathological with no redeeming value. I advise therapy and medication. Individuals attempting this degree of edge play truly risk death and yes people, death can and does happen.

@Anonymous 03/22/13: No one said that death could never happen in a real situation like this.

It's called fiction, and if you didn't agree with the topic you could have stopped reading it. The story was interesting, well-written, and NOWHERE recommends that anyone actually try something like this for real.

Why cant a Goddess kill a slave in front of his dad slave. . after attaining all the properties from the dad and killing his only son right in front of his eyes as he watch Goddess killing slave helplessly. .

Great build-up, awesome story!

Rhis is a brilliant story - very well written and suspenseful until trhe last sentence.

Very good ..... thats real love !!! and she is really good