All Comments on 'falling'

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WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
it's all good

First two strophes very good, last two even better. I think this may be the best piece of erotica I've read from you.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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It may be good

Oh wicked one

But leave it to a man to end an erotic piece with sleep.

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