I have read your other stories with pleasure, but this one stunned me into inarticulate joy. The imagery, the way you build this entire world in such a short story, is amazing. The lyrical descriptions just sing and there's a wild erotic quality to this story that is just mesmerizing. I'd have to say it's my favourite of all your stories. I'd love to see more like this. You write good smut to be sure, but this is art, this is poetry. This has power. You rock.
As well done as any fantasy story I have read. And I was that bit in love with Darien that makes it completely absorbing.
I enjoyed that story , it was very well written .
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