All Comments on 'The Bet Ch. 03'

Wifey? Hubby? You are a sick assholey.

Hot story. Don't pay attention to the asshole comments by people who read categories they hate. Keep writing!

Love?? You have to be a butt pirate, a goober gobbler, I bet you'd eat a turd after writing SHIT like this

this is one hot story......... and I am a hetro woman

that was a really hot story! keep it up!

What a great series of stories! These has been fun to read and has made for some great fantasy. Thanks for your hard work, and for making the charactes interesting. While many of us don't have such a highly imaginative wife, it's always great fun to think of the possibilities............

I enjoyed your writing and I hope that you will continue to write and explore your abilities. Be encouraged!

Hot! Love the series, let's have some more?

My expectations were probably too high! I also know it does not really work that way. It read easily except for those 'cutesy' names. Your 'Canadian' story seemed more down to earth and believable. Keep at it because you do write well!

I have a wife similar to "Lilla" & when she has those urges, All of me gets the pleasure! Keep up the great writing!

I did not think I could get into this story, I'm going from 3 stars to 4

There's simply no way he walks anywhere with 5 inch heels. It would take days and weeks of practice for him. Hell, most women have problems with 5 inch heels. He'd break an ankle. And the pegging bit? He didn't sign up for that and I though it was totally unbelievable that, with no conversation about it, she simply pulls a strapon out and pegs him. Not realistic or good in any way, shape or form.

Getting better, but still pretty boring for a “lost bet” story. Most “lost bet” stories go pretty hard and erotic with femdom, forced nudity, cfnm, forced bi/gay, photography/blackmail, but after 3 parts this is just to tame. 1 more chapter…hope it gets better.