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by LeBroz12/14/06

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Just look at all not said ~
A cold climate
A packed pub/bar/tavern
And so much more in images subtly given.

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by duddle14612/14/06

Smoke.

Last night's smells ~ still lingering...

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by LeBroz02/08/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.



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by tazz31705/11/12

AN IN THE MORN

the clothes still bare those odors. TK U MLJ LV NV

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